[Denied]Whiskeys Application #3

[MasoDa_Dorica 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

What’s your Minecraft Account Name? : Whiskey234

How old are you? : 19

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes, I am aware the server is PG-13.

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): Yes, I have applied on Twice before.
#1 Failed. https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/118552-whiskeys-application/

#2 Failed. https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/118680-whiskeys-application-2/

Have you read and agreed to the rules? : I have read all the rules and agree to every single one of them.

What’s the rule you agree with the most? : My most agreed rule would be intentionally causing trouble or being consistently toxic it’s nice that I found a server that does type of things

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): I have no Questions for any of the rules.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I was looking for a new server, and new experiences and I happened upon Lord of the Craft.

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying? : Roleplaying is the act of creating a story within another world, and being a character within the world.

Doric: Tim how in the world did you get on top of the home?!

What is metagaming? : Metagaming is a method of playing where you go a little beyond the basic rules of the game, creating your own way of playing it.

What is power gaming? : A method of playing where you stick to the games mechanics and not change it in any way, shape, or form. Generally used for games with heavy storylines such as The Last of Us. Where you playing as Joel, and stay Joel. Never going far from the trail to progress quickly through the world.

In-Character Information

Character’s name: Doric Urickymaso

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Adunian

Character’s age: 35

Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.) After the raid of bandits in his mother’s homeland, Doric came into the world nine months later that of a bastard child. His mother exiled from her family when it was discovered her lover was part of the cultist, though she still retained her pride the High Elves were so well known for. Keeping the child she was bearing swearing to raise him well. So Doric was raised solely by her on their small farm, a few miles from a small village living in isolation as many elves looked on in disgust of Doric knowing of his father’s history. Although people were usually cold to him, he never let it bring him down, and continues to be a good person to everyone he meets going out of his way to make the people around him laugh and be happy.

   He lived all his life on the farm, occasionally sneaking off from his chores to explore the surrounding forest, always having an itch to travel to get away from the small isolated farm. Whenever he found a injured animal, he would bring it home and nurse it in secret keeping it safe and well fed giving homes to any hurt creature in need. When he became an adult, he told his mother about his idea to leave the farm, travel, and begin a guild to help the less fortunate as he knew there were people out there with sufferings, although ignorant he knew the world wasn't kind... She wasn't very happy about it, terrified of how he might be treated in the outside world if anyone discovered who his father was even if he did help the less fortunate.

  Doric however ignored his mother’s begging’s to stay home, and left. With a pack of supplies on his back and ambitions that grew to even beyond him he set out into the world... Only to find it was way worse, to see people fighting constantly and the dealings of the daemons and undead. The crazed cultist of the world to hold onto the old traditions of the dark temples, he holds to his dream of creating a better world without having to resort to his blade. He hopes to bring up a guild, and to create a shelter for those that need it most, no matter what race they are.

Personality Traits: Open hearted, intelligent, resourceful, leader, respectful, clean, idealist, hard worker, and adventurous.

Ambitions: To begin a guild that will protect those in need, and give homes to anyone who comes to them, whether it be soldier, or civilian.

Strengths/Talents: He is able to catch onto brand new concepts very quickly, making him very adept in alchemy. Another strength of his is his trusty dog he met during his travels.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: He is terrified of spiders out of all the bugs out there, it's the spiders that send him into a panic, and he is very clumsy with a sword and relies heavily on his axe to defend himself.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://imgur.com/rCcZqUD

[Friendly Guy 223]

Note to other AT's: Reviewed as the application before this one posted by same user had formatting issues.

 

1: Definitions are incorrect. You give examples but not the actual definition

2. The bio needs to include Lore about the server ((Names of towns names of maps ect))

3. More weakness's add things like "Unable to swim" "Scare of heights"

[Friendly Guy 223]

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