[Denied][Pending] Trexation [2]

[trexation 14]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: 'trexation'

How old are you?: '15'

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): 'yes'

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): 'yes'

                                                                -https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/118784-my-application/

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: 'yes'

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:  'the combat rules are through, and makes combat sound...real world

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? my friend deutchland63 told me about your server.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: To be a set character and act accordingly to the set time period and atmosphere.

What is metagaming?: MetaGaming is taking illegitmate information [from OOC or message] and taking it into roleplay, e.g. knowing someone's name without speaking to them.

What is powergaming?: PowerGaming is doing inhuman or overpowered actions in roleplay.

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Treckhims Johan

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Human [Highlander]

Character’s age: 37

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

Treckhims was born in Vekaro in 1460. He recieved a supreme education from his father,one of the many great teachers of the time. Treckhims was soon able to design magnificent machines and fortresses as a young child. His mother died when he was 8 years old during child birth. She gave birth to a young orc named katie, who killed her in the birthing process as the katie's horns stabbed into her, causing huge amount of internal bleeding. Katie soon died of infection, when Treckhims father feed her cow milk instead of sheep blood because of his ignorance to go ask an orc. In the time off of school, the two school mates Treckhims and (deutschland63's new character) began to talk they quickly became great friends. 

 

As Treckhims grew older he became a designer for the Empire, always working on the latest and greatest military fort or a new wall, a hundred years ahead of some of the other nations. he lived on a farm near Chase, and they kept a close friendship for many years. He was quite famous among designers of his time for his new and innovative designs, and dreams of teaming up with Chase to design and make an amazing, complex town someday.

  

Personality Traits: Smart, and very bright, but in his logic, sometimes appears to be cruel and inconsiderate, even when he is trying his best to be kind.

Ambitions: I am one who leads and plans to build in military might, and is out to better defend my homeland

( I want to found homeland security....Jk)

Strengths/Talents: Treckhims was skilled in activities of the mind, such as the maths and the sciences. He always had a gift for design and early gear based mechanics.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Treckhims was never skilled in dumb labor, and was physically weak.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Treckhims is slender and around 6'3"

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guidehere): http://gyazo.com/b65c87ceabddf1aa81bab1094b855894

[Readicti 902]

• You're human. How could your mom give birth to an orc? And also, orc babies don't have horns for that exact reason. You also don't feed an orc baby sheep blood. And you don't die of infection from eating the wrong type of food. 
• Also, humans don't exactly have an official school that you attend so it's impossible to really have school mates.
• A reminder- although you may say your father was a great teacher in Vekaro, no one in the game will recognize him as such.
• What's "the empire"? Try to give a name.
• You took about that part about your friend Chase and so now it's a random character that's just mentioned.
• You cannot be a famous designer as once you get onto the server no one will know who you are.
• Expand on your strengths- what do you mean by "agility and intellectual activities?"

 

I am going to deny this app for now. There seems to be some added work and I feel that you should take some time to read through the human lore and try to make you biography fit it. You may re-apply in 24 hours. If you have any questions, feel free to message me.

 

[Readicti 902]

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