[Denied]Odarc's (Cycy67) Application

[CyrusxD 0]

Out-Character Information

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: cycy67

How old are you?: 17

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): no

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I agree with all the rules, but if I had to choose one, I would have to choose a rule under the 'role play rules'. The rule I would agree the most with is trolling. This is an obvious rule that all servers have, to prevent people from disrupting the enjoyment of other players. It is important that this rule is enforced on servers, especially on role playing servers where trolling can be taken to unbearable levels.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): They are all pretty clear. Basic rules and easy to follow!

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? One of my friends currently plays and invited me to join him.

 

Definitions

 

What is roleplaying?: Taking the role of another character (similar to acting).

What is metagaming?: Taking out of character information and implementing it into in-character

What is powergaming?: Forcing your will against other people in role playing. Example: Fighting someone and saying you slain them. no chance of block...etc.

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Odarc

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Dwarf

Character’s age: 167

 

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

At a young age Odarc's parents vanish and were declared dead. He was raised by his aunt and uncle for only a short period of time until at the early age of 16 he began working  in the mines. He would begin his work in the mine from the break of dawn until the first gimps of dusk. He pounded and smashed and broke every stone in every corner of the cave ,working till his body turned to stone itself. No other cave dwarf worked as hard as he did.

Years later, at the age of 21 and one dark clouded day in the mines, while finish his day a lightning struck the entrance of his mine, enclosing and collapsing the exit to the cave. In there, he waited with a few other dwarves. Moments later a sound starts to rumble deep within the cave. A figure appears and walks closer and closer towards their last breath of lantern light. It was the undead! With the his strength and swift thinking of Odarc picked up his axe and fought the undead, defeating a small group of them, protecting his friends. At that moment his friends realized his potential of being one of the most courageous and fit leader for the dwarf army. Hours turned to days and days  became weeks, but eventually Odarcs notices a small breach of light appear at the entrance of the mine. Others have came to save them! Only himself had the energy and determination to set himself and the others free. He dug and mined, until eventually set free! At last, fresh air.

After days of thinking Odarc finally decides to officially join the army. Surviving battles after battles and war, Odarc moved up the ranks quickly, but he aged. Odarc truly proved his worth as a warrior and eventually he stopped because his colleagues insisted it was time, but he resisted. Odarc finally settled, down, but once in awhile he tries fight for the dwarf army, by strategies and battle tactics.

Personality Traits: wise, courageous, inspiring, caring, faithful 

 

Ambitions: To protect and defend his family, the dwarf race.

Strengths/Talents: Strong minded, smart. Excellence at mining

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Old, weaker compared to the younger dwarves.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Height: 4ft 8 inches. Weight: 187

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): 

link to an image of my skin

http://imgur.com/JIp6zJs

[Overland 349]

  Your application has been denied, please reapply after 24 hours with the requested changes made.

• Please re-size your font, it is much harder to review when it is that small.
• Please expand upon all three of your definitions.
• While your biography is of a decent length, I have a few concerns with it:
  • It contains little server lore; the wiki http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/ contains all the information you need such as town names
  • The Undead didn't exist during the time frame in your biogrpahy; they either existed over 100 years ago and came back very recently.
  • It also contains a few elements that don't make sense, how did he survive underground in an enclosed space without any oxygen source for weeks 
• Your strengths and weaknesses are a little unbalanced. You also say that he is weak, but can also mine (a task which requires strength?)

 

Feel free to private message me with any questions or concerns you have regarding your application or the server.

[Overland 349]

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