[Denied]Eagle536's Application

[Eagle536 1]

OOC

What’s your Minecraft Account Name? Eagle536

How old are you?: 12

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/112651-eagle536s-app/

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:  Using roleplay to get into areas that are not accessible via Minecraft mechanics

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): Both sides must agree on using either text-based combat or mechanics-based combat. If both sides disagree, then you must use the default which is mechanics-based combat. There must be sufficient roleplay leading up to any combat scenario.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Just roaming around the internet for good rp servers

 

Definitions

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is when you portray the role of a different person, assuming the attitude, personality and actions of the player making different connections and enjoying yourself

 

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is when you know something when you don’t actually know it like their weaknesses, their strengths and when their next move is. Metagaming is also when you break the mechanics of the game to work them in your favour.

What is powergaming?: Powergaming is when people try far too hard to win and is only interested in winning by creating different loopholes in the rules and doesn’t really care about the roleplay they only care about power and wealth.

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Character’s name: Gorlan Cider

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 24

Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): When I was 7 my parents were killed during the plague and I was left to die then a man, whose name I still don’t know to this day but he said this “you have the strength needed in a young boy to do what needs to be done” those words are still ringing in my head. Then it happened… I was 15 and was in a village whose name is never to be said ever again. We were ambushed, and on the coats of the soldiers was the one thing we didn’t want to see…

The Royal Coat of Arms… of King Ostromir Carrion my master was horrified, so he took the coat of the commander to show to the king. We were entering the city gates on horseback when a lady came up to us and started screaming then the guards started surrounding us then my master demanded what was happening that when the king himself greeted us and shouted TRAITOR! Me and my master didn’t wait we started to ride out the city gates and they started to close the gates then the worst happened… my masters horse was shot then I came back for him and he shouted I’ll be fine but then my horse was shot from underneath me and I ran. Then … I saw a soldier put a sword through him then I vowed for revenge.

Ever since then every time I see one of Carrions Soldier… I put a knife thru his heart with this final word “My master will be impressed but what about yours?” Living life on the road has been hard with only my cloak and bow with arrows and finally my 2 knifes.

Personality Traits: Cautious, funny, loving, loyal and faithful

Ambitions: to bring order and peace to the 5 Kingdoms of the Athera

Strengths/Talents: Archery, Silent movement, knife combat and horse riding

Weaknesses/Inabilities: when some close is killed or slain.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 5ft 8 and 90kg

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):  http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/3325677/cloaked-ranger/ theres my skin ty in advance for looking at it cheers to who ever spot anything wrong with it it'll help me later :)

[Overland 349]

  Unfortunately your application has been denied, please reapply after 24 hours with the requested changes made.

• Your meta-gaming and power-gaming definitions are incorrect.
• While your biography is of a decent length, I have a few concerns with it:
  • It contains little server lore; the wiki http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/ contains all the information you need, such as town names.
  • It makes little sense, why would the Carrions want to kill you or your master? It's also cliche to avenge them, I suggest completely changing you biography in that regard 
• Please balance your strengths and weaknesses.

 

Feel free to private message me with any questions or concerns you may have regarding your application or the server.

[Overland 349]

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