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[Kehnn 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

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What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Kehnn

How old are you?: 16

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes.

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I agree with all of them, they are all needed.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? A friend told me about it.

 

Definitions

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What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is like your character is you, like if you are living what your character is living. ( Like, just because you aren't a Orc in real life, doesn't mean you aren't a Orc in your imagination.)

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is when you use your in real life knowledge with your character. (Like when you read about other character in the forums, and then IC you talk with him like if you know everything about him, but your character don't even know him.)

What is powergaming?: Powergaming is when you don't allow other players to react to your actions, like everything you do no one can stop. You think you are the most powerfull and invencible character in the world.

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Kel'Ral Warbleeder

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Orc (Uruks)

Character’s age: 105

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Kel'Ral Warbleeder lived in a village close to Sanjezal. His parents died in war. A elder of the village have been teaching him how to fight since childhood. Kel'Ral growth strong, already 55 years aged. Always prepared for a fight. All he wanted was to crush skulls in revenge of his parents. His village was also close to a Dwarf village too, they were good allies, the orcs admired the Dwarves. But unfortunately, there was also a enemy orc village nearby. They were hostile to other orcs village close to them. They called themselves the biggest and the strongest that they don't need a allied village. They kill any strange people that pass their way.

 

Then the day of fight have arrived. A tribe of enemy orcs nearby have been planning to take down Kel'Ral's village. Kel'Ral was hunting because his village was in need of food. He would do everything to help and protect his people. When he had enough food, he returned to his village, and he saw it was under attack by enemy Orcs. He quickly grabbed his axe and went to fight. In the end of the battle, all the enemies had perished. However, many of his people have died too. Kel'Ral fought hard, but couldn't save everyone of his village. Then he went to his allied village, and saw it was destroyed too, all the dwarves, dead. Now he carries anger on his heart, he is a very agressive Orc. When he was 78 years aged, he joined the war nation of Krugmar that was located to the north of the Cloud Temple of Aegis, among the dunes of the deep desert. In the beginning of all, all he wanted was to revenge his parents by killing enemy orcs because he thought by killing enemy orcs his wish of revenge would be satisfied. But he was wrong. He almost have forgotten why he as fighting. The blood of the enemies shed...  The enemy tribe being destroyed... All this war... pleasures him. He don't fight for his parents anymore, he fights because he thinks it's a need of life. Now, 105 years aged, he have a lot of marks of battle around his body, and is more agressive than ever. He never left the life of war, and pretend not to.

Personality Traits: Agressive, strong, Brute, Hostile.

Ambitions: The much damage the undead and enemies orcs takes pleasure him.

Strengths/Talents: He always fight with the heaviest weapon he have. He never give up of a fight, is a bit slow but strong.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Hes weakness is his allies, he will do everything to protect them. He can't run fast or swim too well.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Dark green skin, with marks of battles around his body. Height 9,5 Weight 480 lb.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://minecraft.novaskin.me/skin/4772591457796096/Orc

Edited December 1, 2014 by Kehnn

[Readicti 902]

• Your biography is short and lacks sufficient lore for your characters age. I recommend looking at our wiki page for big events he would have lived through. 
• It's cliche to want to take revenge on your parents death and for an entire village to be killed. Why would he take revenge on his parents going to war?
• Be more specific in what "the day of the fight" is. Why did this other orc group attack? 

[Readicti 902]

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