[Denied]Application Attempt #2

[Almighty Thor 33]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: thor92299

How old are you?: 15

 Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes Have you applied to this server before?

(Please link all past applications): no

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: hacking

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I've been searching for a server like this for a while. Found the YouTube channel, and a friend showed me.

 

What is roleplaying?: It's creating a character and acting as them. Or imagining an environment and acting like it's there. It's like larping

 

What is metagaming?: This is when you use out of game sources to give your character and advantage over someone. EX: Watching a YouTube and using the video to find a hidden stash or their house so they can steal or burn it.

 

What is powergaming?: Where a player roleplays with someone without giving them a chance to react, like I slice someone in half, if the person had a weapon they could block the attack.

 

 In-Character Information Character’s name: Durac Kazriksson Character’s gender: Male

 

Character’s race: Mountain Dwarf

 

Character’s age: 76

 

Biography(Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Started life as a novice smith, and Mercenary in his home city. His clan was The Thunderfists. There he made his living through being a smith and mercenary. He is known through his city for being gift in the art of smithing and fighting. He has captured or killed all his targets he was hired to do, except one. He then spent most time training as a smith in hopes of working for the king as his quartermaster. In a competition he lost due to his opponent “tampering” his tools so they broke after a small period of use. With this failure he was master smith in his city and became the leader of a band of mercenaries. On one of his most unfaithful jobs he was betrayed by the person that has hired him. When he was sent to a camp so he could protect it from bandits. When his group showed up a band of rival mercenaries showed up in the tents and slaughtered all his men. With this to happen he was enraged and killed as many as he could before being forced to retreat.

 

With this shame he wanted to leave his city behind and start a new. He gathered all he could such as: his Steel full armor set, and Steel Two-Handed Battle Axe, his rucksack, and a small sum of gold (5,000), smithing tools, torches and a tinderbox, a journal, and books. In his travels he journeyed far through Middle Earth looking for jobs he could do such as; chasing away bandits, and repairing armor and weapons. In his journey he went into a small village and met a slave trader. Viewing the slaves he had Durac saw Aditi Faith and asked about her. After learning that she didn’t know that much and did have potential. With that the dwarf made a bet with the slaver for Faith. Durac said “ If I make you a finely made full armor set and sword in two days, I win Faith. But if I lose I will give you the set and sword.”. When the slaver agreed the poor slaver had no idea that he was making a bet with a master smith. In one day Durac finished the armor and made the sword before the deadline with plenty of time. With this bet that has been won Durac gave gave the slaver the armor for his loss and gained Faith. When the two left the village Durac gave Faith the sword and said “ You are not a slave anymore. You are a mercenary with me and I’m the leader of this group. I will be teaching the things you will need to know in this job.”. Giving the books and basic training for a weeks Faith knew on how to fight using the chain and sickle with deadly precision, and knew healing magic and basic destruction spells. From here and on is unknown this is the story of Durac Kazriksson.

 

Personality Traits: Brutal, strategic (in battle), kind (in rare cases),

 

Ambitions: To become a renowned master smith or become an infamous mercenary group.

 

Strengths/Talents: Two Handed Weapons, Heavy Armor, Strong, Battle Trained, Testosterone (Health Bonus), Stubborn (knock back bonus),  

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Stubby legs, Unable to use magic, Poor aim with ranged, Poison, curse (greed), Not perceptive with trap/ambushes, poor with tailoring.

 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Chestnut, frizzy hair almost fully covers a strong tense face. Beady gray eyes, set lightly within their sockets, watch vigorously over the country they've bled for so long. Dark long braided beard that compliments his face and leave a pleasurable memory of his adventures life. The face of Durac Kazrikson, a true mastersmith. He stands easily among others, despite his athletic frame. He has a love for music. He is 4' 11".

 

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): Terribly sorry but the picture is too big. Again I am sorry but I will post the link to my skin. http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/4440945/dwarf-commander/

[Overland 349]

Denied

Unfortunately your application has been denied because you didn't wait the full 24 hours; please reapply 24 hours after this post and with the requested changes completed. 

• You still have yet to make all the changes I mentioned last time I reviewed you:

   

  Lord of the Craft is not set in the Lord of the Rings universe. Please use lore from the wiki (http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/)

• You don't have to use the race bonuses as strengths.

Feel free to private message with any questions or concerns you have with your application or the server.

[Overland 349]

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