[Denied][Pending] Skarar's Application

[Skarar 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication! 

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Skarar

How old are you?: 13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): I am aware.

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/120382-skarars-application/

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: I have both read and agreed to the rules of this server.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I agree most with the rule no hacking because it gives a definite advantage to the hackers.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Some friends told me about Lord of the Craft and I thought it was great.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: I believe that roleplaying is when you play as if you were there and take the role of a character. You would say/act events that your character would be experiencing at various times.

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is saying/acting something that your character wouldn't know.

What is power gaming?: Power gaming is when another in game character decides what you do without you having any say in it (e.g. Jim throws a forceful punch and knocks Bob out cold on the dusty dirt.).

 

In-Character Information 

 

Character’s name: Skarar Antioch

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Human Heartlander

Character’s age: 21

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Skarar was born in the kingdom of Renatus. He grew up in the great and peaceful city of Arethor, where he learnt many of his skills. When he was younger, he always loved to run around in the forests but as he aged, his father taught him how to hunt. He started hunting with small meat knives, killing small animals like young, wild pigs and deer. As he got into his later teenager years, his father gave him a bow and a quiver of arrows. He practiced shooting targets for months until he felt ready to kill animals. He killed animals like strong, fully grown deer and big birds which he never could get. Every night after hunting, he would bring back several animals for his family to eat. The nights that Skarar couldn't get any food, he stole from markets and guards that were distracted.

 

Skarar made a name for himself for being an good hunter. His father used to be a brave and relentless warrior but those days had passed. Skarar's wise father always taught Skarar lessons on hunting and fighting until one night. Skarar and his father were talking in front on the crackling fire when his father brought up the military. Skarar hated the military because he didn't like the idea of following and obeying the orders of others. His father thought it would be a good idea for him to join and serve his kingdom, so he forced Skarar to join. On the first day that he joined the military, he met a shady man. He was always staring at Skarar. One day the Military of Renatus decided to have a archery competition. As Skarar was a hunter, he knew how to use a bow so he decided to enter. On the day of the competition, Skarar won every event up until the finals. He was matched  against the shady man. The shady man shot first. His forceful arrow glided through the air and hit the the bulls eye. Skarar knew it would be a hard to win but he took the shot. His spectacular arrow sliced through the air and split the shady man's arrow in half. Skarar won the competition. Skarar went to shake the shady man's hand but before he could, the man pulled out a dagger and sliced Skarar's face. Skarar took out his bow in pain and shot a fatal arrow at the mans throat. The man fell over onto the floor. Skarar struggled over to the well and covered his wound in water. After the event, Skarar quit the military and started a journey to explore.

 

Personality Traits: Brave,  Athletic, Loyal, Stern, Stubborn

Ambitions: To travel the world and discover its secrets.

Strengths/Talents: Archery, Stealthy, Good with a sword,

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Gets drunk easily, Blind out of left eye, doesn't have a right hand, has terrible eye sight

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Cuts and bruises all over his body from hunting and fighting, Cut over left eye from a dagger, brown hair, black eyes 5'7", 175 lbs

Skin: http://imgur.com/Iav1fDT

[Overland 349]

Pending

Your application has been put on pending, please make the requested changes within 24 hours to be accepted. Please private message me once you've done so.

• While your biography is of a decent length, I have a few concerns with it:
  • Arethor existed over 50 years ago, more recent lore can be found here (http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Athera)
  • It's unrealistic to split an arrow in that manner, and the reason for the man stabbing you makes little sense.
• Please expand upon your weaknesses.

Feel free to private message me with any questions or concerns you have regarding your application or the server.

Denied

No changes were made, please reapply after 24 hours.

[Overland 349]

Moved to Denied Forum