[Denied]Chair102's Application

[MrAviator 9]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: chair102

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Trolling, because I hate people that just want to make you mad

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? A friend told me about it

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Where you act as someone else

What is metagaming?: Going outside the games limit

What is powergaming?: Going toward a goal in a game

 

In-Character Information

Character’s name: Lance Mannering

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 22

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Before my parents were killed, my dad taut me how to fish and mine When I was only 8 years old our house was raided by Orcs, I was able to escape, but my parents did not and were slaughtered. I swore that I would avenge my parents by killing every Orc I see.  I've learned how to battle by asking and training with the knights at the nearest city and is great at sword to sword combat, but have very little experience with a bow. I live in the woods were I stalk my prey and think my battle strategies. I like to drink to forget the memories of my love ones. I am a hunter.

Personality Traits: Adventurous, Intelligent, Independent, Stubborn

Ambitions: To kill every Orc I see

Strengths/Talents: Wielding and striking with a sword

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Magic, Baking, Alchemy

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 6ft 2in, 210 lb

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/winter-traveler-wolf-hood-/

[+ Reggieo + 112]

 

I think you need to rework your application! - It is not very detailed

 

~Your biography is to short and further more its very cliché - Raided by Orcs that killed their parents is so over used and does not make your character unique in the slightest.

 

~Biography has no server lore in it - I shall post a link with the Human wiki page

 

~All three of you definitions lack explanation - please expand in the next application

 

~Your ambition lacks imagination: Kill every Orc you see is impossible

 

~Your character can not know magic - This is something that is taught in game

 

Human Wiki Page:http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Humans

As you were denied this time, you can only apply again after 24 hours from this post, with the made changes.

If you need help with the process of your application please contact me! I'm happy to help

 

You have used 1/5 applications this month

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