[Denied][Pending] Application

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What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: bobtheghost818

How old are you?:17

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):no

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:yes

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?

Through friends on team speak.

 

Definitions

 

What is roleplaying?: Acting as a certain role or "character".

What is metagaming?: Knowing information that my character wouldn't know in game.

What is powergaming?: maximizing progress towards a specific goal

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: mata mac Cullach

Character’s gender: male

Character’s race: Highlander

Character’s age: 24

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): It all starts where I was born, back in the late 1400s with nothing in mine or my parents name besides and old shack with one bed that my mother slept on. My father was never home since he joined the war to support us with food and a place to stay. I worked with Eigill Gjermus on his parents farm so I would have something to do during the day and it made me a little bit of coin as well. Me and Eigill became great friends over the time being. My mother never worked since she was sick and could barely move. When Eigill and I wern't working we spent our spare time in the library learning about far away lands and gaining knowledge far past our elders. Many years past and the war was getting closer to our village or as the Governing area called it "we are taking a better stationed position at a near by surplus station". Doing so it lead the war to our home killing hundreds of our people including my mother, and Eigill's parents as well leaving us with only our wit to survive. Our history was erased from the world as long with our people so me and Eigill want to remind the world of the tragedy that happened on that day by making a collage filled with knowledge of all so no one is forgotten like our people. When Eigill and I tried to make a collage for our dream we were raided and I died. As I layed lifeless  Eigill mourned for me but stayed smart and remembered about reading a book that told where a ancient necromancer lived in a certain cave. He made a trip crossing over many mountains and great lakes to get to where he read about. He was weak and close to giving up when he layed his eyes upon a interesting hand carved door made of oak. He started to hear a smooth but dark voice in his head to enter so he did so but with me in his arms. When he entered the voice gave him instructions to do something with my body on a stone slab. When he did so the room went cold, the world felt like it stopped, it was silent. A blue light appeared in my chest and I felt breath. When I awoke I saw Eigill staring blank at me then he focused and said "why are we here?" as though he lost all memory of what happened ever since he layed me on the slab. We talked about it and didn't question much but now came the situation of where to go to make the collage. On the trip he did see a village that was nice to him while he passed and he recommended  we make the collage there out of harms way. When we got there the name of the glorious village was Luevaarden. This is where we start new!

Personality Traits: openness

Ambitions: Wanting to make a collage for our people and to keep knowledge for those who can't.

Strengths/Talents: Determination, able to read and write

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Weak, lazy, fear of spiders and snakes

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):  height 5.10 and weight is 167p

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=2agkcqf&s=8#.VMCQnIvF9CY

[Tirenas 677]

You have 24 hours to make the following changes. Please feel free to contact me once you have updated your application and/or if you have questions.

• Your character's backstory is fairly cliche, in that it includes family members being killed in some devastating war which resulted in the disappearance of his entire culture. 
• The ambition portion within the in-character section is supposed to be your character's ambitions, not your out of character ambitions. 
• The definitions for roleplaying, powergaming, and metagaming are incorrect. Metagaming is somewhat close to being correct, however, it lacks clarity. 

[Tirenas 677]

This applicant has not fixed the aforementioned issues within the allotted time, and thus is declined on the basis of inactivity.

[Tirenas 677]

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