[Denied]Application

[Kart20 0]

Out-Of-Character Information
Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: TediBB
How old are you?: 12
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): No
Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: We do not tolerate trolling
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? : I searched for roleplaying server in Google and i found this server , joined and i found out how great it is so i applied

Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

What is roleplaying?: Playing in something like imagination world - with a role and with other humans . There is a lore and other things (like races , kings , wars , etc.) that enchant the game and make it different from the normal minecraft server .
What is metagaming?: an "out of character" action where a player's character makes use of knowledge that the player is aware of but that the character is not meant to be aware of. Metagaming while taking part in relatively competitive games, or those with a more serious tone, is typically not well received, because a character played by a metagamer does not act in a way that reflects the character's in-game experiences and lore.
What is powergaming?: Playing with too powerful character and doing unbelievable and impossible things with too little work .

In-Character Information

Character’s name: Nathair
Character’s gender: Male
Character’s race: Human
Character’s age: 24
Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): My character was born in Aesterwald , he lived into rich family ,  he traveled a lot (Into the Karakatuan Empire , Haelun'or). He returned in the great kingdom and he started living with his father's moneys . He now lives into the city of Aesterwald .
His mother ran away when he was seven age old and nobody knows what happened to her . His father died in battle with undeads in the town Winterfell when Nathair was 21 years old . He had twin , which name was Suoshi , but he ran away when he and Nathair was on the travel , when they passed Haelun'or and Suoshi stayed there and lived with the wild tribes .
The travel of Nathair and Suoshi started when they was 9 years old , so they will be able to forget their mother and their father will be free to fight . Nathair returned alone at age of 22 just month after his dad died . When he learned the news about his dad he didn't cried , he was strong . He continued living in Aesterwald ...
Personality Traits: Ambidextrous , Clever , Smart , Beautiful , Magnetic , Too Selfish , Strong
Ambitions: To get higher in the society
Strengths/Talents: Talking , Diplomatic , Spying , Hiding , Working (reading , drawing , writing)
Weaknesses/Inabilities: Working (with iron , stone , etc.) , Fruits (he is allergic to fruits) , Mug and Dirt
Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): He is high (1 meter and 93 centimeters) , thin (79 kilograms) , golden hair , aquamarine eyes , pale skin , aquamarine and white clothes
Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://m.imgur.com/5INfB4X (this is the link to the photo of the skin that i created based on my character )

I am sorry for my bad english , but it is not my first language . Thank you .

[Wyvernbane 252]

 

-Your meta-gaming definition is plagiarized from Wikipedia.

This is your first and final warning. Failure to correct will result in a ban.

-Power-gaming definition is incorrect.

-The fact he resisted dark magic is a tad power-gamey.

-Father dying to Undead and mother running away is a bit of a clique.

-Biography is hard to follow.

-Strengths and weaknesses are unbalanced.

-Appearance does not match human lore.

 

Please wait at least 24 hours before re-applying.

Feel free to PM me if you have any questions.

[Wyvernbane 252]

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