[✔] [Accepted] [Pending] Application

[Kart20 0]

Out-Of-Character Information
Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: TediBB
How old are you?: 12
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes
Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): Yes - https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/121659-application/, https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/121708-pending-application/, https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/121815-application/, https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/121851-application/
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: We do not tolerate trolling
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? : I searched for roleplaying server in Google and i found this server, joined and i found out how great it is so i applied.

Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

What is roleplaying?: Choosing a imaginary character and playing with his personality. You have to "get in the shoes" of your persona and live his live. It is like theater.
What is metagaming?: To use knowledge that your personage doesn't knows to help him by his own turns .
What is powergaming?: To not give fair chance to the others - like Edward gets his sword and slashes the throat of Susan - Susan can not react, because Edward said what happened to her.

In-Character Information

Character’s name: Nathair Fer'aheral
Character’s gender: Male
Character’s race: High Elf (Pure)
Character’s age: 92
Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):Nathair was born into Haelun'or in his parents’ house. He grew up with other children and was very happy. He had lots of friends and everybody enjoyed him. The father of Nathair had relationship with other woman, so the mother of Nathair divorced from him. The mother of Nathair married for seventh time and her husband died mysteriously few weeks after the merrige, few days after she divorced from the father of Nathair. His mother now lives happy with her pets and her flower garden.
The broher of Nathair - Suoshi married to a woman and they now live happy in Karovia, Akovia. By his age of 75, Nathair began his journey to Laureh'lin and Korovia, to try to find his brother and to learn new things. He obtained a lot of souvenirs, but while he was returning home he threw them into a river. He was though that he doesn't need souvenirs to remember his adventures. He returned home at the age of 83 and he moved from Haelun'or to the village of Leyulin.
*Nathair was in "The Verdge", "Thales" and "The Fringe", but nothing intersting happened to him there.
Personality Traits: Clever, Magnetic, Egocentric
Ambitions: To get higher in the society
Strengths/Talents: Working with his mind
Weaknesses/Inabilities: he is allergic to fruits (expect pumpkin), working with his hands, swimming (he is scared of water), listening (like his mother), fighting.
Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): He is high (1 meter and 93 centimeters), thin (79 kilograms), golden hair, aquamarine eyes, pale skin, aquamarine and white clothes.
Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://m.imgur.com/5INfB4X (this is the link to the photo of the skin that i created based on my character ) (the skin had little changes cause i lost it and i recreated it from the picture . Now he have longer hair and other armor over the clothes)

I did my best, i am sorry if the application is still bad :( .

[James 425]

Your application is

 

 

Please wait for a Game moderator to implement your account.

Please fix the following problems within 24 hours on the application: 

• Please properly link all your applications, the first 3 do not work.
• Your age dictates that you include the geographical lore of your characters trave through the Fringe and Thales, the lore can be found here. http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Front+Page
• Your characters father dying is very cliche, it is recommended to change it unless it is very well re-written. 
• Your roleplay definition while correct with the last bit, is a tad confusing at first and you should probably change it. 

 

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM!

 

Note: You've tried very hard on all your past application and seeing that your only problem was keeping the location lore of your characters travels and the other problems were fixed in the application or within PMs I'm going to go ahead and accept this. Sorry for the wait, been very sick. 

[James 425]

Moved to Accepted Forum

[Friendly Guy 223]

Player Whitelisted