[Denied][Pending] Fawnmiller's Application (4Th Time)

[Fawny 0]

What’s the name of the Minecraft account you're applying for?: - fawnmiller

What's your MAIN Minecraft Account name?:- themeparkkid

Do you agree to follow the rules on your new account?: yes

You understand you can not be on both of these accounts at once?: yes

You understand that if one account is banned, so will the other(s)?: yes

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: - Angelica Bryler

What race are they (and sub-race)?: - Human

What sex are they?: - female

How old are they?: - 28

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family: - Angelica was raised on the ocean or at least thats is what people kept telling her. Her so called father had kidnapped her at a young age. His name was Lucas Bryler. The story begins when Lucas is sitting in a tavern drinking ale with his crew he heard a commotion and went to check it out when he does he see people running around like crazy to get to a festival then he notices a small child waddling around he walks up to it and kneels down staring at her with a small smile he looks for parents and not able to see anyone around he picks her up taking her to his ship.

He raises her as his own and even though she was only four she didn't say muchonly the word "Angel" so with that he named her Angelica. As the years passed he found it hard to keep his crew from harming her. So they arrived in a new land and told her to go off and find a new life so she did. As she stepped onto the land she met and married a man name Bertrand. They were crazy in love and soon they saw the land to dangeand got on a boat meeting a monk who told of them of Pateros. He told them of the Gods and other races they could possible meet. The monk told about sentient felines, ones who have their own kingdoms.

Ones that craft fight and explore A thing angelica would most likely see as something from the tales of old or the blabbering of a drunk.

What are they like (personality)?: - She can have a bit of an attitude, loves to drink rum, she can be sweet at times.

What are their ambitions?: To have a family of her own

Do they have any special skills?: - She is pretty decent with a bow.

What are their weaknesses?: - Her worst fear is to lose people she loves and meeting her real family

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: - White hair, blue eyes, wears a blue shir and pants and brown boots.

Anything else you want to say about them?: - none

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: - http://imgur.com/zFuOuan

[MamaBearJade 2090]

 

 

You did not complete the following changes within the timeframe.

 

 

 

You did not do as your past denials asked which was add more lore

"Grew more beautiful" - Please remove this, your bio already is very strongly mary sue

Ambitions are lacking

Rum is not a weakness. Please give actual weaknesses, fears, ect

 

[MamaBearJade 2090]

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