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[Lambo 0]

Out-Of-Character Information
Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!
 
What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: mocara
How old are you?: 14
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes
Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Banning discrimination or prejudice
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): Just the word "Derogatory" but I know what it means now
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Looking through rp server lists
 
Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!
 
What is roleplaying?:Pretending to be a character
What is metagaming?:Using external factors to affect the game
What is powergaming?:Having no weakness (being overpowered) 
In-Character Information
 
Character’s name: Farndor Huntsman
Character’s gender: Male
Character’s race: Human (Highlander)
Character’s age: 26
Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

Born in the Fringe on the 11 of The First Seed, to a woodcutter Gorndor Oaks-man and his wife Waidin Stir-maid, Farndor lived a difficult childhood. His parents had no interest in taking care of him. At age 9 they moved to the source of the Nocibur River. With negligence parents, Farndor had to fend for himself. Stealing the bow his father kept for defence, he learnt fish, trap, swim and to make or take what he needed. His parents abandoned him and left moving to Petrus.
Farndor began to steal and hunt, making a living until he was 17. In the 11 month of his 17 year, he met a girl washing clothes in the river. He fell instantly in love. But Catelyn High-run was hard to woo. After 2 months of courtship she finally agreed to marry him. After 2 months Catelyn was pregnant. But during labour Catelyn died. The son lived but consumed by the grief of his    lose, Farndor smothered the child. He burnt them and scattered their ashes in the river. He retreated back into himself and became isolated. He began to have trust issues. He lived the rest of his life in solitude and only coming into contact with other humans when selling his wares.
Personality Traits: Shy, Brave, Lacks compassion(due to the lose of his wife), Riddled with guilt
Ambitions: To find the love he lost
Strengths/Talents: Good Hunter and Fisher, Horse Rider, Merchant, Quick Reflexes, Butcher 
Weaknesses/Inabilities: Grief, Illiterate, Fear of commitment(underlying root of fear:Fear of being hurt by love), Shorter Left arm then right
Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Height:6'1", Weight:9 st 6 lbs, Hair:Brown rugged stubble, Eyes:Blue/Grey empty, Skin:Freckled Pale, Left Arm: Slightly shorter then right(From 3 fractures after climbing an ent) Clothes: White Shirt, Green Overcoat, Blue Ragged Trousers,A Brown Side-bag
Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): I don't have a url for my picture. If some one knows how please reply.

[Elad™ 560]

I'm sorry, but your application has been DENIED.

 

It would certainly seem that you've plagiarized your metagaming definition from the wikipedia page of the same subject. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Metagaming

 

This is a warning. All definitions in your application must be written in your own words, not just by changing the tense of a word.

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What is metagaming?:Using external factors to affect the game

[Elad™ 560]

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