My Application (worked hard on it plz accept)

[Nigthhealz 4]

Out-Of-Character:

Minecraft Account Name:Nigthhealz

-How old are you?: 16 (its my birthday today :D )

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:GMT 0/Iceland

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: yes i have a good grip on english and a good grammar

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I have a natural love of gaming on the PC ( especially on Minecraft ) and i love RPG's :)

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:im able to play 10-15 a week

-How long have you played minecraft?: I have been playing Minecraft for 2 years

-What do you know about roleplaying?: I understand that Role-Playing is like a big drama performance exept with no script and the choices you make can make a big difference. I also know that you only say what your character knows not what you know.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: I think this server will be completely different as it looks like the best RPG Server ever made

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: My Friend's Server i quit because it was laggy

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes I have and i agree to them

-Name the 4 races on this server: Elves, Orcs, Humans, Dwarves.

-How did you hear about us?:i saw Reckreations video

-Did you vote?: Yes i did and will continue

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:Nigthhealz

In-Character:

-Character Name:Patrick James

-What is your Race?: Human

-Biography:Patrick grew up in Al'Khazar with his buddy Harris they went mining and fought with wooden sword's alot for fun

Harris went mining alot and taught Patrick to mine and Patrick taught Harris to fight with sword's

Mining and Sword Fighting was Patrick's Hobbies

but one day Harris had to move to Winterfell and Patrick never heard from him again

Patrick is now 18 and is going to Explore the beautiful world of Aegis and maybe meet Harris again then he will return to Al'Khazar and get a house and try hard to become a guard

-Character Age:18

-Character Appearance:He Has Blue Eyes,Black Hair and a Blue Shirt

-Character Personality:Patrick is very friendly and loves helping people and he is very hard to anger but can get angry

-Your ambitions:Explore the beautiful world of Aegis and when he returns to Al'Khazar to become a guard

-Can your character read or write?: he can read but not write and he will try to learn to write

-Can your character mine?:Patrick know how to mine his friend Harris taught him how to mine

-Are you a capable builder?:Patrick can build but he is not good at building

-Can you wield a sword?:Patrick is very talented with the sword because he used to play with wooden swords as a kid

-Enjoy Farming?:Patrick does not like farming

-Does your character have any special skills?:Yes he is fearless

-Other Information: This server looks awsome and I have spent a really long time thinking about my character and I would love to join and if i get denied can u tell me what i did wrong and what to fix because this is my 5th time and i want to get in this server

-A screenshot of your skin: http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/human-adventurer/

[Slayer15855 3]

Denied.

You need an extensive and indepth character. That means you need an awesome biography and also indepth analysis of your characters ambitions, personality etc... You character is the entire point of this game, you need to put a huge amount of effort and detain into it. It is basically a second person. Make it fun and interesting but not ridiculous, and always within the lore.