[Denied]Drummon's Application

[Drummon 5]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Drummon

How old are you?: 18

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I agree with all the rules. I think that good rules are essential for a good server.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Friends

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Assume a role in the community

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is playing by server ruleset

What is powergaming?: Do something against another player without giving him a chance to respond you of that action. For example: i killed my enemy in one hit. Instead I need to use: I attempt to kill my enemy in one hit, and allow him to dodge my hit.

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Anton Drum

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 18

 

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

Anton Drum was born by unknown parents in Al 'Khazar. In his childhood, he lived in a workhouse, with his twin. When his twin died because the master brutally beat him, Anton decided to run away from workhouse and he survived thanks to his theft to richest people.

One day, he was discovered by one of the city guards. He managed to escape from him, but he was forced to leave the city. So he reached the city of Petrus, where he met a friend that taught him the art of fighting.

From this moment, he will be more interested about art of fightng, so he decided to work honestly to earn money to buy an armor and a sword. He worked like a cook in a tavern, where he could hear visitors' stories about fight and war.

When he earned enough money to buy an equipment, he started his travel around the world, and in one of his travel, he met a group of bandits who maltreated a woman. He intervened immediatly to help her, but also if they were too many compared to him, he beat them. Bandits' leader told him some important words, that he still remember.
 

"Guy, you're very strong. You're going to be the best warrior on this lands."

 

These words increased his esteem and he discovered that the woman was the wife of a fight arranger. He will teach a lot of important things to Anton, who learned quickly. At the age of 18, he's working hard to improve his skills. 

 

Personality Traits: He's shy with unknown people, but enjoyable with friends.

Ambitions: Be the best warrior in Athera

Strengths/Talents: His ambition 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Physically is weak and fragile

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): He's 1,70 metros, 55 kg, blonde hair and iridescent eyes

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

 

-Your meta-gaming definition is wrong.

 

-Your powergaming definition is a fair bit off. Try to define powergaming in it's broader spectrum, as it can goa lot farther than simply forcing actions on someone's character.

 

-Your character's biography is much too short.

 

-Your character's biography has jumbled server lore. As you note both cities in Anthos- and Athera -and him simply seamlessly going to each one.

 

-Your character's biography is poorly written, is incoherent, and doesnt make much sense.

 

-You cant play a human who has unexplained, and random iridescent eyes.

 

-You need to expand upon all your character's extra info.

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any further questions.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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