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[Killerzaz202 1]

what’s YOUR Minecraft ACCOUNT NAME?: - Killerzaz202

How old are you?: - 13

Have you ever roleplayed on a minecraft server before? If so, where?: -yes i did rp on mythcraft and i have done some on star wars the old republic rp SERVERS 

Have you APPLIED to this SERVER before? (Please link past APPLICATIONS): - https://www.lordofth...4-killerzaz202/

 

How did you hear about us?: -DatGreekBoy told me all about you so i just had to try this SERVER

What do you think the server will be like? - i think it will be good but some parts a bit annoying and  fun

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - yes i have 

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: - i aggre most with the SKIN rule becus in a rp thing and people come with batman SKINS i just get so annoyed

Do you understand combat rules, and what you can and can’t do if you do choose to roleplay as a villain?:-yes i understand and i totaly agree with them

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so maybe we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):-no i understand every one

 

Definitions

 

These terms are a major part of the server and in a few of our rules. Please define them so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel FREE to Google the answers or check on our wiki, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: - CrCreating a very-detailed imaginary charachter and acting like that characther rather than yourself.Feeling it, and reacting to the people according to your own imaginary charachteeating a very-detailed imaginary charachter and acting like that characther rather than yourself.Feeling it, and reacting to the people according to your own imaginary charachte

What’s metagaming?: - Using OOC information in IC.For example learning players name by looking his Username above his head and using it in IC withut asking question 

 

What’s powergaming?: - Suppressing another Charachter with your actions.Declaring yourself the "winner" without giving a chance to your opponent.

 

In-Character Information male, 24, templar armor 

 

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that you follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want TO PLAY.

 

What’s your character called?: -Tallion Grayhame

What race are they? (and sub-RACE if APPLICABLE): - Human

 

What gender are they?: - male

 

How old are they?: - 24

 

Give us a highlight of their past, What life events make your character the person they are today? This is your character's biography. It is also required to include SERVER lore when writing. (Names of towns, major server events, ect. Most lore can BE FOUND on our wiki.): -  Tallions  Grayhame Tallions  Grayhame grandfathers used to fight in Phoenx revoulution with Phoenix king Ezekiel Tarus for the Kingdom of Renatus

 After that, his FAMILY moved to a town named Burdersberg  He learned that his kin lives at the Oren, Other Greyhames.For that he went to the Oren for finding his relatives and he dident find any so he was gonna RETURN back to oren when he heard someone talking about a castle named Fort Dunaf what was suppost to be the family castle so he went there and he found other relatives so he stayed. he told them that he wanted to be a templar so they began to train him to fight and gave him templar armor and a great sword they invited him to stay with them and he accepted but he went out to find other templars to train him of how they act and how they are like.

 

What are they like? (personality): -he is nice and have manners 

 

What are their ambitions?: - he WANTS TO become a templar 

 

Do they have any special skills? What are their weaknesses? (Try to list a few of both): - he is experienced with a sword and he is a good commander and good with a horse. weakness he cant PROTECT hiself against arrows and he is stubborn and will only lisen to the family if they are around

 

Give us a description of how they look?: - brown hair no beards have templar armor and alway carrys a great sword

 

Please give us a SCREENSHOT of your character’s SKIN:i can sill not attach a file and i dont know why, but please let me join i can send on SKYPE or twitter or anything like that 

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

-You've made no prominent changes from your last application. 

-You can see what you need to fix in your previous denial reasons.

 

1. Formatting, please. It's a pain to look at with all the links popping up in between etc. Spacing is important and how the text of the app flows.
 
2. Link ALL your previous applications in the right section at the question which asks for it.
 
3. Grammar and writing. Some sentences cut off in the middle somewhere and then just proceed again elsewhere. This whole application is messy.
 
4. Redo the definition section please, in YOUR OWN words.
 
5. For your picture, use www.imgur.com to upload.
 
6. Extend the biography and traits, personality, ambitions etc. and let them correlate with eachother.

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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