Donald 0 Share Posted April 1, 2015 Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication! What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: My account name is donaldmcdonald How old are you?: I am 15 years of age Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes I read it on the original Moo's post. Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No this is my first time Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes, I do agree What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I agree with the spiteful death rule because it would be against RP if someone knew they were coming back to life. Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): Yes, I don't agree with the NLR rule, why would you forget about everything if you have been reformed again. sorry just a question. How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I found out on a youtube video posted by definitely A panda. Definitions Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is when you get a character and you stick with it, you change your mindset to the character's mindset, talking how the character speaks and interact with others as your character would too. What is metagaming?: meta gaming is when you bring excess information that your character should not know into role play which can ruin your character. What is powergaming?: power gaming is wanting too much power or wanting to complete the game you forget about role playing and the people around you. In-Character Information Character’s name: Amdor Serego Character’s gender: Male Character’s race: Wood Elf Character’s age:19 Biography : not knowing his father who left him, Amdor has been called a half breed the whole time he lived with his mother in the woods. Standing out fro the wood elves with his blonde silky hair and multicolored eyes. He decide he will venture at the age of manhood to find his father. He will travel across every mountain, every river of Athera, talking to locals and popping back to Cerulin and visit the Silver city for jobs. Amdor, being truthful since he was a child has never lied, which backfired a lot when he got his friend in trouble for "Speaking the truth". Still waiting for his manhood to come, he prepares for his venture. as the war between the dwarfs against the humans and elves broke out, Amdor used to stay in the forest and supplied food for the elves and the dwarfs. He is told that once he reaches manhood, he will have to fight with other elves, which Amdor would not prefer due to the amount of bullying he received from the higher elves for being half breed. But if necessary he shall fight bow in hand for the honor of the Elven gods using his swiftness and scouting ability to search enemies bases and sabotaging them, even though he does not like war. Amdor loves the nature, kills only if necessary and thanks the gods for the food at his table. He looks for different roots to ease his mother's pain at home. asking merchants where they get their medicine because he has no way to pay them. Personality Traits: Amdor never lies and is loyal to his friends, both can backfire. He is irritated easily and keeps the hatred for the people in his childhood in his right eye, hoping it will never unleash. Ambitions: his ambition is to travel across Athera to find his father. He will even go to the Abyss if he knows his father is there. Strengths/Talents: Amdor was always good with a bow, hunting was his natural ability. He can also do a bit of sorcery. Weaknesses/Inabilities: he is too curious and is too loyal. he can not go hand to hand combat with another man for he shall be overcome by their power. Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Amdor is 175 cm and weighs 55 kilograms. he is terribly light for his height. he has multicolored eyes, 1 blue and 1 red. Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):http://imgur.com/AdA7JCt Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
MamaBearJade 2090 Share Posted April 1, 2015 19 is very young for an elf. You are not considered an adult by society till 50. Lots of lore issues with your bio - You are called a halfbreed yet you dont explain more than appearance that is actually seen in wood elves - The High Elves do not allow wood elves to just wander into it, let alone "halfbreeds" - There hasnt been a war between humans and elves. Its been humand and elves against elves - Again you state halfbreed in your bio. How are you a halfbreed when your appearance is that of a flood blood elf? Can not know magic prior to the server. You must learn it in game from a teacher Weaknesses are not actual weaknesses Weaknesses must balance out strengths I highly suggest talking to Baconthief, Dakirennis, or Combustionary for information on what has happened with the elves. 1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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