[Denied]Application (5Th Time)

[justDEWit 133]

Out-Of-Character Information

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What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: funny981

How old are you?: 11

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): I understand that it is PG-13

Have you applied to this server before?: Yes, this is my 5th time this month. Hopefully I make it, wish me luck! [Denied]Application For Lofc

[Denied]Application (2Nd Time)

[Denied]Application (3Rd Time)

[Denied]Application (3Rd Time)

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes I do agree to the rules.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Don't hack it makes others game experience horrible.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No, I understand all of them.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Looking on Google for LOTR servers.

 

Definitions

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What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is making a character and playing his/her role in society.

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is when you use knowledge beyond your characters knowledge like using magic if you don't have a magic teacher.

What is power gaming?: Power gaming is when you don't let the other person get a chance to do anything like killing them automatically. If you attempt to kill him/her then that's not power gaming.

 

In-Character Information 

 

Character’s name: Otha'Tissracke

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Uruk

Character’s age: 18

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

       Otha was born in Athera, he was born in a Uruk camp in a desert, his father was a renowned soldier in that camp. The fathers name was Otha the Merciless, while the mother's name was Glorina'Tissracke. She trained the kids to get ready for the future wars they will probably have. The mother went harder on her kid because she knew he was going to be the best warrior. Although it was common for Orc kids to be trained very hard, she went even harder. Every night before Otha went to sleep, his mom took him far away from the camp and let him find his own way back, or he would die. One day while he was training he saw lots of figures blurred by the heat waves from the sun. Curious, he walked toward the figures and saw a catapult and many, many Dwarves. He ran back to the camp and told his father about what he saw and Otha the Merciless yelled out "Pushdug gazats want to have a strigz with Uruk. Kill them!" All of the adult and teenage Uruk grabbed their weapons and charged toward the Dwarves. Otha was running to safety when the Dwarves threw spears at the camp and one of them cut his leg. His mother picked him up and laid him gently on the floor in the tent.

        She put a bandage around his cut leg and told everyone to stay inside the tent. She grabbed some wheat, water, and some weapons and gave it to all of the kids. She said "Uruk not going to win strigz."  *They all look and see half the fighting force gone* "Mi need lat to flee!" *They all ran away into the desert by then* A few minutes later, Otha heard his mother scream very loudly, he knew what happened. He ran up ahead of the other children since he didn't want them to see him crying. He thought they would see him a weak Uruk if they saw him crying. He yelled "Hurry up, now!”,they all ran for days and days until they saw another camp. Otha told the others to stay there while he went into the camp. He drew out his weapon and slowly walked in. The next thing he knew everything went black. Otha woke up in a prison cell with no memory of anything in his past. When he woke up he felt a huge bump on the right side of his head. He saw some books about Dwarves religion, so he started reading. In the book he saw that the religion revolves around their many gods they named Brathmordakin. The leader was Yemekar, the Creator. The worship of Yemekar and Brathmordakin is lead by a Kirkja Dverga in the common language. He read about how they chose only one god based on if they have the same traits as that god. Otha then looked up and saw a Dwarf standing at the cell across from him. Then he knew he had to think of a plan to get out of that hellhole.

        One day when a Dwarf came to give Otha some food, he grabbed the Dwarf and tried to hit his head into the bars of the cell. Before he could do that the Dwarf shouted out “There is a prisoner trying to escape!!! Ring the bells!!!”  Otha then knocked the Dwarf out, and unlocked the door with the key. He climbed up the walls of the cave and saw all of the Dwarves running to the cell. He shimmied until he saw the mouth of the cave, but Dwarves guarded it and there was a gate. He climbed down the wall and tried to sneakily knock out the guards. A Dwarf archer saw him and yelled, “He’s at the gates!!” The two Dwarves turned around and saw Otha and slowly walked toward him. Then Otha said, “Can nubhosh gazats hear? It sounds like Uruk are coming to klomp gazats.” Right after that moment the Orcs broke through the gate and killed the Dwarves with spears. Otha walked out of the cave and got on a horse. He rode off looking behind him to see the Orcs winning in the battle. He grinned and said to himself “Mi clomp gazat.”

Personality Traits: Otha is super-confident, persistent, and impulsive. He always wants to be the leader because he thinks he is always right, and he usually is. He will never give up because that’s just not his style. He uses all of his effort and abilities to complete a task, if he fails, he’ll try again. He is a great leader, but he forces everyone to follow him. Most follow because of his confidence and persistence, but some are scared they might die if they don’t join his cause.

Ambitions: Otha wants to figure out what happened before he was knocked out. He wants to remember every single little detail. One day, he wants to find out about his whole backstory.

Strengths/Talents: Otha is a master swordsman, weapons crafter, and a navigator. He usually carries a scimitar and holds it backwards, making it super deadly. He goes for the leg, trying to disable his enemy’s movement for a long period of time so he can finish them off. He was trained to be a fighter, but sometimes watched his father make different kinds weapons. Now because of that, he can craft many war machines and hand-held swords. He often puts a his name “Otha” in blood red on the sword. Since he was going to become a great soldier like his father, he was taught how to navigate the seas and land. He always carries a compass with him just in case.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Otha is a great leader, but every leader has their flaws. He was cut in the leg so he cannot run around, but only walk, this disables him from being in a war. A Cleric or a Druid must heal it. He loves to gamble but he usually loses, but he has almost little to no money. Since he loses, he ends up in debt with many people and they are looking for him. Some of them are looking to kill Otha. He has a fiery temper, taking no excuses. If he senses even a little part of an excuse, he gets MAD. He cannot control himself and yells at the person he is talking to. He has such a harsh temper, he could hit his allies and they could be seriously injured.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Otha wears bracers, shoulder pads, shoes, and a loincloth for protection. He has blood red eyes and a tiny bit of metal on his bracers. His hair is also dark purple and he has 2 tusks. He is 6’ 9” and weighs 276 pounds.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here)orc_6600_skin_minecraft_skin.jpg

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Denied.

 

-You failed to link your past applications.

 

-You're not allowed to apply as a character under the age of 18.

 

-Your character's biography adheres to, than breaks server lore oddly.

 

-You dont explain how your character has the random ability to be a master weaponsmaker, navigator (And in the sea after being raised in the desert), and swordsman.

 

-Your character's biography is a fair bit nonsensical. He was told to run away- he ran away, than saw his mother dead... than he was taken prisoner? And than after spending a fair bit of time reading a book about dwarven religion they put into a prisoner's cell he broke out at the 100% perfect time the orcs were about to attack and take him out of an unnamed and unexplained cave place of dwarves?

 

-Holding a scimitar underhanded is not deadly, but rather very impractical and a bad idea.

 

-Orcs standardly only have 2 tusks.

 

-Orcs speak or orcish, or 'The Blah' as it's colloquially known.

 

-As this is your 5th application you're hereby banned from applying till May 2nd.

 

-You may re-apply on may 2nd.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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