[Denied] Application

[bobisthebest1234 317]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: jacobcraft04 

How old are you?: 10 years old

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I agree with not much OOC spamming

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): some of the war machine stuff is too advanced  

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? some minecraft forum when i was looking for good role play servers

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:playing a character you make

What is metagaming?: is when you look above somebody's name without know it in a roleplay way.

What is powergaming?: are usually roleplays things that may be impossible to do.  

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: William 

Character’s gender: male

Character’s race:human/heartlander

Character’s age:34

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): i was born in a big city in a snowy area, we moved when i was 12 to a hilly town and when i was 27 i married violeta ( vi-o-let-a) she is a beautiful woman with long gold hair. we had a kid his name was john he is a small little guy with deep black hair.

 

my job of an trader made me rich. when i go to town i'm socially high and very smart i don't like mud or un clean  races like trolls or Demons. when smallpox hit my town my family fled with a coach drove by a man name charle he is my servant.

                    

Personality Traits:hair is black, no face hair. i wear robes. tall and not to strong.    

Ambitions: be a noble or a land lord and kill all bad! 

Strengths/Talents:smart socially high and rich and convincing. and not bad on a coach. 

Weaknesses/Inabilities:hate un clean races and bad races hate mud and long swims and walks and hate one corse meals and is week to dark magic and sucks at war! 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 175 lb. 6 ft. 

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): i'm a steve skin please don't reject me! 

[Elad™ 560]

I'm sorry, but your application has been DENIED.

• Each of your definitions are far too short in length. It's a good idea to include examples too.
• Your meta-gaming definition is slightly incorrect.
• Your biography is short, explains little of your character's history, and is chock-full of grammatical and spelling errors.
• You biography contains very little server lore whatsoever. I'd advise reading up on our wiki.
• Please include the proper names of towns and cities you describe in your biography. At the moment you're being fairly vague.
• Demons aren't a thing in our server's lore.
• Smallpox isn't a illness in our server's lore.
• You've failed to list any personality traits, and instead put down your appearance in the section.
• Your first and second ambition are achievable of a person you've described in your application.
• You can't be of noble status in your application.
• The weaknesses you've listed aren't really weaknesses at all.
• The only weakness listed that would even vaguely count as a valid one is far too general.
• Please include more detail in the appearance portion of the application.
• You must include a screenshot of your character's skin.
• The skin you use on the server must fit the theme of the LoTC universe.

You may re-apply in 24 hours. It's advised to make changes accordingly as per the notes above when doing so.

[Elad™ 560]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.