[Denied] Fanklin's Application

[Imperium 3495]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:Shadowhunter464

How old are you?:13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):I am aware that the server is PG-13

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):yes https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/125843-fanklins-applications/

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes I have read and agreed with all the rules

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:I have to agree with the No hacks rule because that breaks the RP of the server  and makes it unfair.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):No I understand all the rules

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?From a youtuber

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:Is when you act as a character in a game.

What is metagaming?:Is a game that has a set of rules that you have to follow.

What is powergaming?:Is when you declare your actions to another player.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:Fanklin

Character’s gender:Male

Character’s race:Human

Character’s age:28

Biography: Fanklin was born in a town outside of Gimblewood. His mother died at birth so his farther took care of him. His farther was a farmer with littlle land so they didnt have that much money. So what Fanklin did was get a job in town at the local inn. Fanklin work hard but still they were about to lose the farm, so when Fanklin was only 14 his farther sold him into slavery promising to buy his freedom when he got the money.

                  Life as a slave was hard he went from master to master for years. After three years Fanklin gave up hope that his dad would free him. After about five years of moving around Fanklin was given to new master but this one was differnet then the others, Fanklins new master was a swordsmen a good one at that. One day when Fanklin was cleaning out the house he came across one of his master's swords. Fanklin always wanted to have a sword so hey when into the feild to have a few swings. As Fanklin was swinging the sword he did not see his master watching him up the hill. "What do you think you are doing?" his master said as he walk up to Fanklin, Fanklin bowed down to his master expecting him to hit Fanklin but the hit never came. " Your stance is slopy" his master tolded him. Fanklin not knowing what was happening looked at his master, "You are good with a sword but you can be better" his master said. So from that day on Fanklin was trained in the way of the sword.

                 After a few years of praticing with the sword his master said,"You have done well, you have learned all i can teach you so go travel the world and learn more about the way of the sword". Fanklin accecpt what his master told him pack his thing and left on a long journey. After years of slavery he was finally free.

 

Personality Traits: Funny,kind, and caring

Ambitions:To travel the world and help those who need it, and become better with the sword

Strengths/Talents: Good with a sword, A good farmer

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Not a good shot, not that smart

Appearance:Height 6 feet and 8 inch weight is 178 pounds. I couldnt get the sreenshot so go to the link http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/3975904/the-traveler-2/

 

[James 425]

Your application is

 

 

You are not aloud to re-apply until 24 hours pass upon denial.

 

Your application has been denied for the following reasons:

• All your definitions need to be expanded upon.
• Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are both incorrect.
• Please add more server lore to your characters biography. Lore can be found on the wiki (here) http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Front+Page
• Why was your character born in gimblewood as a human? Gimblewood is the town of the halflings for reference
• Expand on your characters weaknesses and strenghts
• Expand on your characters appearance (More than just his height and weight) . 

 

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM!

[James 425]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.