altoninjas 3rd application submission

[altoninja 6]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:altoninja

-How old are you?: 14

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I do speak English but i have moderately good grammar, i have a few spelling errors.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I'm able to play as much as 25 hours a week and at the least 10 hours.

-How long have you played mine craft?: I have been playing Mine craft for about 2 to 3 months.

-What do you know about roleplaying?: I know that rpgs are games that replicate the mide evil ages and there mythical creachers or sometimes the future and let you adventure in different lands with friends or strangers

-What do you expect this server will be like?:i expect it to like a combined mash of my favorite free time activities of mine craft and world of warcraft

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: i played on my friends server but he was becoming a DICKtator and he turned it from a building server to letting only secretion people be opped and the others like me have to by or find things and my bestfreind move to this server about three weeks ago and I want to leave the other friend sever

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: yes

-Name the 4 races on this server: Dwarves, Elves, Orcs, and Humans.

-How did you hear about us?: my best friend!

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:Altoninja

In-Character:

-Character Name: Bronze Beard

-What is your Race?: Dwarf

-Biography: Bronze Beard grew up in a small house above his dads somewhat successful architect business. When he was young his father taught him how to build and design houses and traps and all sorts of stuff. Later on his father was kill by a creeper while he was working on his newest creation late at night, a trap house house with tnt flooring for in case of an invasion. Later his mom was hospitalized with a severe case of depression. Bronze beard spends his free time killing creeper, drinking ail, and visiting his friend ambros for a good adventure. Bronze beard has taken over his family business and hopes to become quite successful.

-Character Age: 200.

-Character Appearance: Bronze Beard has a waist length orange beard and he wears a gold and red helm he received form his father as so did he threw out the generations.

-Character Personality: He is bold and quite courages, but also fun loving and easy going. He also loves his ale.

-Your ambitions: He lives a fairly easy life making a living but his true ambition is to become an architect.

-Can your character read or write? : When he’s not drunk

-Can your character mine? : He is quite skilled, being a dwarf.

-Are you a capable builder? : He is very skilled a quite the natural.

-Can you wield a sword? : Yes but he prefers an axe or bow and arrows.

-Enjoy Farming? : No.

-Does your character have any special skills? : Yes. He hopes, and is a very skilled builder and can weld an axe.

-A screenshot of your skin:http://s1134.photobucket.com/albums/m603/altoninja1/

[Slayer15855 3]

Denied.

You need an extensive and indepth character. That means you need an awesome biography and also indepth analysis of your characters ambitions, personality etc... You character is the entire point of this game, you need to put a huge amount of effort and detain into it. It is basically a second person. Make it fun and interesting but not ridiculous, and always within the lore. Also space it out.