[Denied] Application

[TheEnderLord77 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: TheEnderLord77
How old are you?: 15
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes
Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): no
Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Do not wage war without reason
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Youtube

Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

What is roleplaying?: To act out a role
What is metagaming?: strategy used in games
What is powergaming?: A style of interacting with games

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

Character’s name: Crow
Character’s gender: male
Character’s race: human
Character’s age: 16
Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

 

At the age of 12 crow could disarm most men and shoot better then most. Everyone wondered who this mysterious boy was for no one knew who his parents were. Cro would wander from town to town in search of jobs but often he would spend his time in forests getting his own game. 

 

On his 16th birthday crow decided he would start a new journey and find a place to stay so he set off towards the capital. On his way there crow discovered a village that had been burnt to the ground, curious as he was he decided he would investigate. After following footprints down the track he was disappointed to find nothing. So he reached the capital forgetting what he had seen.

Personality Traits: Ambitious, curious and impatient 
Ambitions: To gain power
Strengths/Talents: Good with a bow and sword
Weaknesses/Inabilities: wounds 
Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): slim but muscular
Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): file:///C:/Users/sood/AppData/Roaming/.minecraft/screenshots/2015-04-22_14.09.11.png

[IrishPerson 693]

 

Sadly I've had to deny this application for the following reason:

 

- Your meta-gaming and power-gaming definitions are incorrect and the roleplaying definition could do with some work.

 

- Your biography seems to contain some slight powergaming which you should remove. You should also add more information/lore to your biography.

 

- Your weaknesses, strengths, ambitions and personality should be added too.

 

- Your screenshot of your skin is not working.

 

On a side note you should work on your spelling/grammar although you'll normally never be denied for this on its own.

 

Please re-apply twenty four (24) hours from this verdict. If you have any questions feel free to PM me on the forums. Good luck!

[IrishPerson 693]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.