[Denied] Algerion's Whitelist Application

[Algerion 0]

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Algerion

How old are you?: 15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): i am aware

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No i haven't

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: This one LotC does not condone account selling or trading with the intent of trading personas, skills, items, whitelisting, or the like.  If an account is sold, it's personas will be wiped. This rule is very important so that players cant just buy an already whitelisted acc and if they have they are already op because of the adventage they get with the stuff that is already on the acc                                                                                                             

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? By the youtuber :ProbablyNotAPanda

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is creating your own character and actually act like them its like a movie you play the part of your own character

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is an action that is ooc by knowing something that they are not supposed to know/ tell like where someone is or saying where someone is.

What is powergaming?: Powergaming is maximasing your charaters build/perks by focusing on only training them and doing nothing else

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Ragnar Dragonskin

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age:  19 

Biography: When Ragnar was young he and his village got attacked by a group of raiders his father and mother died and thus he swore to find the group that killed his family and avenge them after a few days of travelling he found a village where he found an old man who raisedhim as a blacksmith every night he practiced with the swords he and his blacksmith master made thus making him an very skilled warrior when he reached the age of 18 he and his blacksmith master made him an armour and sword and set him on his way to avenge his mother and father the only lead he had was that the bandits who killed his family where orc's and everyone knows to back away from an orc when they are angry well not him as the peaple called him in the village as tempered as an orc he fought every orc he saw in his way but after one year of killing and getting hurt and almlost being killed he still hasn't found the ones who killed his father and mother.

Personality Traits: Ragnar is a Brave warrior who has a the porblem of being very short tempered He is also good with his hand and working with metal and such

Ambitions:  to find and kill the ones who slayed his father and mother and then goign back to the village to become a better blacksmith.

Strengths/Talents: Ragnar is very good with his sword and thus became a warrior but he is also good with his hands and tools becuase he first was a blacksmith 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: He is very short tempered so you can easly make him very pissed off and thus making him rage and going reckless though he dous soemthimes calms down after a couple of minutes it is  a weakness 

Appearance: He has an iron armour and a underneath a blue cloak given to him by his black smith master he mostly wears his helmet and is 6'8'' tall and weighs around 190 pounds

 here is the link to my skin i couldt find how to upload it on the application itslef

http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/5192265/elite-knight/

[Supah 334]

Your application has been

 

Denied

You may reapply once 24 hours have passed.

 

Your powergaming definition is wrong

 

Your entire character biography is a massive cliche, containing the very often seen 'orcs killed my parents' seen in a lot of other applications, as well as the vengeance. Your biography must be reworked, without any cliches. 

 

This would also entail changing your ambition to better fit your character and his biography.

 

Your weakness isn't much of a weakness at all, more of a personality trait. Please come up with more weaknesses to balance out your strengths.

 

Please make the changes, and you may reapply once 24 hours have passed. Feel free to message me over the forums with any questions you might have!

[Supah 334]

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