[Denied] My Application For White-Listf

[deadlypsyhco78 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: deadlypyscho78

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Not using Destructive hacks. 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? My friends told me.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Participation in a role-playing (mostly fantasy) games.

What is metagaming?: The act of using previously gained knowledge within gaming to use for an advantage.

What is powergaming?: A character designed with absolute power.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Kronos

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 18

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Kronos was only 5 when his family was murdered before his eyes. He was then taken by a mysterious tutor who taught him to be a deadly killer. Consumed by his thirst for revenge, Kronos began a quest for retribution, trusting no-one except his tutor, and questioning everything he has ever known. In the middle of his quest for avenge his family, Kronos met his twin brother, Vergil, who was thought to have been slaughtered. Vergil joined Kronos to seek their family's killer and to bring peace to himself. 

Kronos and his brother Vergil eventually found the killer, but behind the killer was an army of all kinds of evil. The killer's army all perished from the steel of which Kronos and Vergil used to destroy them. Finally Vergil and Kronos was face to face to the killer. The killer revealed his name, which was Mundus. Kronos and Vergil fought to the death with Mundus. With one swift hit, Kronos wounded Mundus and he fell to the floor spitting blood from his wounds and mouth. Before he died, Mundus said with pain "Zlatan. Zlatan commanded that your family should die..." Kronos was shocked, because Zlatan was the name of his tutor. Kronos and Vergil ran with such haste to Zlatan. Kronos shouted with such anger, yet Zlatan was calm. At the end, Zlatan admitted, and smirked. Vergil dashed and thrusted his sword in Zlatan, stabbing his chest, but Zlatan reacted quickly and stabbed Vergil also in the chest. Vergil fell down and died. With such great force Kronos swung his sword towards Zlatan and decapitated him. After that, he buried his brother and swore to cleanse the world from evil. 

Personality Traits: Strong, smart, wise.

Ambitions: To cleanse the world from evil.

Strengths/Talents: Strong, good in combat.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Easily persuaded, poor, short-tempered. 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Black hair, hazelnut eyes, muscular, light brown skin, 6 foot, 9 stones.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin :

[James 425]

Your application is

 

 

You are not aloud to re-apply until 24 hours pass upon denial.

 

Your application has been denied for the following reasons:

• Your roleplaying definition is incorrect as you used roleplaying in the definition and gave no description of it. 
• Please expand upon all your definitions
• Your metagaming definition is also incorrect and needs to be more unique from the wiki definition. I would recommend looking at accepted applicants or the wiki definition, but remember you are not aloud to plagiarize! 
• Please add server lore to your characters biography which can be found on the wiki. http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Front+Page
• If he saw his family slaughtered and knew about it, how did his brother survive?
• Your family being killed is very cliche, and it doesn't make sense on why they were killed in the first place.
• Describe the kinds of evil he faced, facing multiple people by himself with his brother is very odd and powergaming for him to come out of it with no injury, especially since it is described as an army. 
• How did your character obtain the armor he wears in the skin? It is very decorative and beautiful for him to have just owned. 
• Please add more to your characters strengths and weaknesses. 

 

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM!

[James 425]

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