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Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: jjujack

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yup and perfectly fine with it.

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): Yes  https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/126147-jjujacks-application/

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yup.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Destructive hacks such as kill aura, auto-mining, and free-cam, though there are many more.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): Nope all cleared up since last one.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I was searching up LOTR Servers and this one looked well put together and something I have never tried before.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is when people act as if they are from a different place and can make there own epic world. It's pretty much acting without a script.

What is metagaming?: Its when you find info on someone and use it to your advantage in a gaming universe somewhat like blackmailing in the real world.

What is powergaming?: Forcing actions upon another player. with there username.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Ezekiel Tookes

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Halfling (Hobbit)

Character’s age: 107

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

                He used to live in Gimblewood as a child. His father left him to go on a quest. He got in trouble a lot for stealing pies and weapons so he could practice with swords and bows. One day a trade caravan came threw and among them were Dark Elves. One of those dark elves taught him magic and he became one of the first Halfling Necromancers. The Dark Elf later got executed for teaching a non elf magic. Then he had a memory wipe spell cast on him to forget what happened and couldn't quite remember anything after that. During that time was  The War between the nations and he was forced to help feed the Dwarves and  Men.

                He Gained many of allies because he killed a cave troll but the Halflings looked down on him for that and was sentenced to solitary confinement. A man, Dwarve, and him went on a quest with him to the dark Elves capital  Ker'nor to get his memory problem fixed. They took a quick stop at the capital of men Petrus where they stayed for many of years. While there he  meet a Blacksmith's daughter and had one child.  But while giving birth she got the plague and died along with her child.  With sorrow he decided to end his life quickly by going to the outside world where he gained knowledge no halfling should've had. He found a  ancient long forgotten book and  became obsessed with wraiths and tried the ancient ceremony. He hoped it would bring his memory back but it failed and made him grow twice the speed the only way to reverse it is to become a Wraith and only five people can do that. He currently lives in Gimblewood  and his deeds he did before were long forgotten. He later found a book of history made by his many of greats grandfather Samwise Gamigie.  The night he read while going to bed he had a vision and it was.

                The City of men, Petrus, will one day be ruled by Halflings, Ents, and Wraiths When a spawn of men becomes a Wraith. He will lead many to battle and many will die. He will have allies of  ents and Dwarves so the fathers will fight against each other for the sake of their spawn. When it hs been done the king shall be locked up on the highest peek guarded by many of armies while the orcs. Devise a plan to kill the Elves. A nation torn apart between all its races. The ones who were peaceful will have to lead.

                It never said a presice date this will happen but he took it as a warning and like his many of Greats Grandfather, He will write of his quests.

Personality Traits: Obsessed, Unruly, and Great at memorizing

Ambitions: To become a Wraith

Strengths/Talents: He is sneaky like all halflings, Knows  his way around the map, and when he can get accustomed to different civilizations. He also knows his way with a sword and daggers and is frowned upon for that.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: When he hears hammers and sees children he is reminded of his wife. He also hates pi as in 3.14 and if he sees Elves he is drawn to them. He is a rebel which gets him kicked out of the hobbit towns alot.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): He is light for not eating much and has a stubby beard he is small about one block tall ( IF you can't change height then its ok)

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guidehere):

http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/medieval-old-hobbit/

I also have one for when I get turned into a wraith.

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Your application is
 
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You are not aloud to re-apply until 24 hours pass upon denial.
 
Your application has been denied for the following reasons:
  • Expand on your powergaming definition
  • You can not learn magic in your application, including necromancy. 
  • That is not the process of becoming a wraith, and there is no ancient ceremony like that, nor would the speed of your growth increase.
  • How did a lone halfling kill a cave troll by himself, and where did he come across it?
  • Lord of the rings is not in server lore, and therefore samwise gamigie does not exist.
  • How would your character know what pie (3.14) is?
  • How did your character have this vision?
 
If you have any questions or  concerns feel free to send me a PM!
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