[✔] [Accepted] Brydogs Application

[Brydog22 0]

Out-Of-Character Info

 What Is Minecraft Account Name?: Brydogs

Age:13

Are you aware the server is PG-13? Yes

Have you applied to this server before? No

 Have you read and agreed to the rules? Yes

What rule do you agree with the most? The rule that there can't be any structures that are not affected by physics

 Are there any rules that confuse you? No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? YouTube

 

Definitions:

Roleplaying is taking on a characters role and making that characters destiny and interacting with other character the way your character would.

Metagaming is using info you get from out of character and using it to give your character an advantage in character.

Powergaming is a character having the ability to always hit the other character such as a character isn't given time to react to a attack.

 

In-Character Info

Name: Bryce Snow

Gender: Male

Race: Mainly wood elf but has 1/4 human in him

Age: 18

Bio: I grew up in my families house not to far from the Kingdom of Oren. Our house was a small house in the woods and nothing really happened at our house. My mother was a archer and she always had her bow with here no matter where she was. She taught me night and day how to use a bow and after that she taught me how to be more accurate. My father was a woodcutter and sold his wood at the nearby city. I am mostly wood elf but I am 1/4 human so I have one blue eye from my father. My mother gave me my wood elf side and I have a green eye from her. My parents met when they were younger and lived close to each other they both love the trees so they would see each other in the forest everyday climbing trees.

My mother and father one day decided to go to the nearby city to get food for are family. I waited all day practice my shooting and did some woodcutting but they didn't come home that night. I started to worry and thought maybe they just stayed at the inn that night so I went to bed. They didn't come home the next day so I packed up all my stuff like my bow, arrows in a quiver, and food. I started my trek there to find my parents. I first looked at the town of Werdenberg which is where they were suppose to be going but they weren't there so I traveled on.

Personality: Dark, Brave, and doesn't like to talk with people. Loves trees

Ambitions: To find his parents, to become one of the best archers, and to learn air evocation magic.

Strengths: Fast, Good at dodging because he is sleek,

Weaknesses: Is not very good with swords, doesn't like heavy armor, Isn't very strong because he is small

Appearance: Has small build but is 6ftand has one blue eye and one green.

I'm just going to type the link since I can't get it to paste.

http://imgur.com/fS292SJ

By the way that is the skin before I changed the eyes to blue and green.

Edited May 4, 2015 by Brydog22

[Fireheart 2777]

 

 

You have been placed on Pending for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You have 24 hours to make these changes. Failing to do so will result in this application being denied and thus, having to wait 24 hours before re-applying.

 

 

 

I request that you reformat your application. Your application should include the questions as well as answers to them. A possible fix to this issue would be to simply copy the format into a word editing program and copy and paste all information that I do not ask you to fix into the document. From there make the changes listed below.

 

Powergaming definition needs to be cleared up. You gave me an excellent example of Powergaming, but what is Powergaming in itself?

 

You can not teach yourself Magic, so to speak, through an application. That, in itself, is more complex RP that requires not only in-game RP, but a different application. After being accepted to the server feel free to approach me about any questions regarding Magic. Besides that, you may contact a Magic Application Team Member after you are accepted. 

 

A curse of Iblees makes little to no sense as far as why Bryce Snow’s father is mentioned of having it. It is true that all race’s fathers were cursed to some extent by the Fallen Daemon, but you do not specify it in detail If you care for more information you can seek it out here. Otherwise I suggest turning away from that and speaking more on what I request below.

 

In addition to that I would like to see a more detailed bio. After requesting the magic element be removed from it an idea would be to explain how his parents met and possibly a small story on one of his encounters in some sort of human settlement as he sought out his parents. You can look here for a little more information on humans and the different establishment that exist.

 

As far as Personality goes, add something in your bio explaining why Bryce doesn’t like his stuff being touched. Ambition to master air evocation needs to go as stated above. It can, however, be an Ambition for Bryce to learn magic.

 

Your appearance as far as height goes is a bit too tall. Considering you are part human your height should be shorter. 7ft is around High Elven height. Wood elves are a bit smaller compared to their cousins, but it is possible for you to be somewhat tall. A suggestion would be to possibly shave off a foot. More information can be discovered by reading the Human and and Elven Wiki pages.

 

 

For any questions or clarification please contact me. Good luck and as a reminder you have 24 hours to make these changes.

 

 

Edit / 7:17 PST: I also forgot to mention that we require a picture of your Minecraft skin for the character. That is also needed as part of the Application format.

 

Edit / 7:41 PST: Currently in the process of PM's with one another. Time Stamps will be placed if applicant fails to respond within 24 hours.

After reviewing the application, post-edits, I am accepting your application. You worked very hard to fix the edits requested to be made to the application and despite issues with your skin, were able to give it for me to review. The applicant has been thus accepted to LoTC. Good luck and congratulations applicant!

[Fireheart 2777]

Moved to Accepted Applications Forum.

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[mmat 7460]

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