[Denied] Whitelist Application - Chehk The Wanderer

[Extraordinary Alpha 3]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: dallas34

How old are you?: 16

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I agree with this rule the most specifically. Do not change your username in attempt to impersonate another player/staff member. This rule being broken will mean issuing a punishment to the player and all their accounts. Should you be found using the mc name renaming system for hte use of harassment and impersonating you can look at being banned for it. Which will be a minimum 30 day ban on all your accounts.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Friends playing on this server.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is the act of creating a new more personal character with your imagination with a background and putting yourself in the characters shoes. 

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is when you tell ingame roleplay information out of game or character.

What is powergaming?: Taking advantage of moves the enemy have not made.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Tuzemm the Stubborn, Now Chehk. 

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Ogre

Character’s age: 46

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Tuzemm was always a little... off. Being as he is an ogre they arent the most intelligent creatures in Athera. Tuzemm's job was always woodcutting and mining. Woodcutting is where he got his love for pets. Even though he destroyed their homes for the birds and squirrels and such he would try to keep them as pets. He thought they were very very pretty. The other orcs didn't bother him because of his short temper. One day Tuzemm wandered off when he was cutting trees and he found this one majestic bird. He kept following the bird trampling is way through the trees but with little thought he was about to fall down a nearby mountain. He trampled and stamped his way closer to his doom and suddenly he tripped. He came tumbling down the mountain with all sorts of slams and crashed and then it stopped. He lay there, almost lifeless.

 

   After that something miraculous happened. Tuzemm began to twitch and shortly after he awoke. He couldn't remember where he was, what his name was or what happened to him. All he knew was his head hurt. It was starting to get dark and he knew he had to find shelter and safety. He scoured the nearby mountain and found a cave not too far off. He sat there and left there for weeks getting food, making primitive stone tools, and trying to think with the little brain capacity. But there was a shred of doubt in his mind as he sat in that cave, he had to go somewhere, anywhere, but no clue where. So he gathered the furs of the animals he killed and made some durable clothing and set out. Staying out of the way of civilization if he could and any nearby threats. When wandering he saw a band a little, stout men. He saw no threat but the men seemed to be at the ready with weapons drawn. The men attacked Tuzemm, arrows flying and slashing. Tuzemm had begun to enter a rage, with his blood coursing he began smashing and bull rushing through them knocking making them fly!  He began to panic after that, his blood, their blood. He ran into the woods, and found a cold damp cave to take refuge at the time. He was saddened and confused at what had happened but he sat there all the same. And it is there is that miserable cave that he came up with his new title Chehk. 

 

Personality Traits: Slightly friendly unless provoked

Ambitions: Food and Pets

Strengths/Talents: Smashing rocks and felling trees.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Elaborate vocabulary and doing as being told (As his name is Tuzemm the Stubborn)

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Height: 11' 7"  Weight: 645lb..

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

 

[ScreamingDingo 20568]

This application has been

Reasons:

• Your power-gaming definition is way too vague
• If you wish to play an ogre, it is a sub-race of an orc which is callled an Olog if I recall correctly, please make alterations with this
• Biography lacks lore, no mention of Athera or anything present in the said application

Please fix these changes and re-post your application after the 24 hour denial period. If you have any questions, PM me.

[ScreamingDingo 20568]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.