[Denied] [Pending] Whitelist Application

[Aquilius_Flavius 10]

Out-Of-Character Information

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Aquilius_Flavius

How old are you?: 14 y/o

Are you aware the server is PG-13 Yes

Have you applied to this server before? No

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/123960-war-rules/  You need a reason to war

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?: Nope, I've played RP servers before

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: A friend's suggestion

 

Definitions

 

What is roleplaying?: Acting as another. Often times, it's a dramatic story. 

What is metagaming?: Using OOC information your character wouldn't know in RP.

What is powergaming?: Being ingame and just playing to one goal, not considering your actions result. Also ignoring the atmosphere.

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name:William Thornton

 

Character’s gender:Male

 

Character’s race: Human

 

Character’s age: 27

 

Biography:

         William Thornton comes from the Wild Northern Lands. He spent his younger years happily with his family. He has two sisters and three brothers. His dad was a traveling merchant, but the family usually stayed at home while he traveled. Will was also known to wander around the forests; sometimes going from village to village. Once he was old enough, Will decided to help the family by hunting for their food. He learned the ways of the woods; how to track, how to move quietly, and how to move somewhat unseen. He lurked in the shadows when hunting his prey. But this simple life wasn't enough for Will. One day, when wandering around another village (mostly unseen),  he overheard a conversation about a place called Athera. Wanderlust soon overtook him.

    He started teaching his brothers how to hunt. Once his brothers had learned how to provide food for the family, Will set off to get a job as a caravan guard. He worked as a caravan guard for several years, honing his battle skills.  Often, an enemy couldn't reach Will before an arrow could reach an enemy. It is here that Will enters Athera. He left his job and entered the city of Petrus.  Wanderlust overtook him again, and he set out for Werdenberg. He lived there for a short time, learning about people like Olivier de Savoie, King of Oren, Franz Vladov, Duke of Adria, Vasili Vanir, Duke of Akovia, Guy de Bar, Count of Norfolk, Symon Stafyr, Count of Werdenberg. But, eventually, he had to leave again due to the fact that sitting still just wasn't for him. He traveled to Dragon's Peak, hoping that the name was as adventurous as the town. After living there for a short white, he decided, yet again, that it is time to move. (up to current time) 

 

Personality Traits: Smart, has a Hard Edge, Humorous, Unforgiving, has a Long Memory.

 

Ambitions: To gain power and status. To find love. 

 

Strengths/Talents: Being an excellent archer. Knows how to manage his money. Good at judging characters. Knows when to run. Fast on his feet. Can track people/things.

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Is only okay at hand-to-hand combat. Doesn't think about himself, but others; will risk his well being for others. Doesn't think higher ranks as superiors and will do his own thing.

 

Appearance: He's 170lbs. About  5'7. http://minecraft.novaskin.me/search/Medieval#20733521/medieval

[_Stigwig 1510]

You have failed to make the necessary changes in the 24 hour time period, you may apply again after 24 hours. If you need any help with your next application do not hesitate to send me a forum PM.

Your application has been placed on pending, before it can be accepted I need you to fix the following things:

 

- You need to include server lore in your biography, I would advise using the forums or the wiki (found at the top bar) to research locations or people associated with the humans, adding them in to your biography.

 

- Your father being killed and a search for revenge is a rather cliché biography, change this to something that gives your personality more depth than a simple tale of revenge.

 

You have 24 hours to make the following changes. If you need any help with your application, or if you have edited it and need me to review it once more send me a forum PM.

[_Stigwig 1510]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.