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Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:Stead123

 

How old are you?:16

 

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes

 

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/128770-applicationstead123/

 

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes

 

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:You need a just RP reason, or 'Casus Belli' to declare war. If there’s no reason for a war, it’s dumb, don’t do it.

 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):No

 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?Google.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:Playing the role or persona of a character that you become. Or play the role of the character such as a guard.

 

What is metagaming?:Metagaming is using external factors to effect the game, going beyond the set limits of the environment set by the game.

 

What is powergaming?:Interacting with games in order to become the best by excluding story-telling(Rp) in order to maximize progress towards a specific goal.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:Daemon Stead

Character’s gender:Male

Character’s race:Human

Character’s age:18

 

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

 

In 1494, in a small fishing town, a child was born. As the full moon shined high in the cloudless sky, the earth began to shake. In an eruption of fire, a being of darkness arose. He took the baby from the parents and simply touched him. The entire town watched in awe as they saw what was happening; a Daemon had chosen a champion.  Then, In as much suddenness as it appeared,

The daemon vanished. That day,
The child of a small fishing town, was blessed as a daemons champion. 
 
 Daemons bloodline was full of mercenaries and bounty hunters. his father, a well known Orenian mercenary, fled the human kingdom in order to escape his dark past and local persecution. As a child, and hearing his fathers stories, Daemon often showed his anger towards his father about his abandoning the life of a warrior, and he often wished his father would take up the blade again and return to his life as a hunter. In his sons youth, daemons father spent much free time showing him how to fight, and teaching him the way of battle. Although his father tried desperately to teach him of fairness in combat, Daemon knew the only honor in battle was victory. 
 
When Daemon was 8, he headed into the woods to hunt for dinner. Hours later, he saw the dark sky and returned to his home. Upon nearing his village, he was blinded by fire. Dropping his skins, he rushed to his parents, but found them on the verge of death. They explained to him of the Orc raid that would've taken their lives, and then, they told their son, of his birth. Daemon was overwhelmed with emotions, anger, sadness, grief, and ran from the burning village. 
 
Taking nothing but his fathers blade, and the gifts he received at birth, Daemon became a paid mercenary, killing for a living. He earned a reputation amongst the land; "The man who fights like a daemon". He traveled the land, bettering his art in the blade, and trying to better his goal, his goal of being the best bounty hunter in Athera!
 

Personality Traits:Cunning. Calculating.  Never really grew up and because of this he is still quite childish. 

Ambitions:To become a powerful swordsman.

 

Strengths/Talents:Quite good with a sword. Very intelligent. 

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities:Quick to temper. Not so good eyesight. Not as good with a bow as he is with a sword.

 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):6ft, 185 pounds. Black hair, pale and clear skin. Wears a crystal infused pendant around his neck(Is unable to remove it). Wears bright coloured clothes (Blue and white). Muscular but is still quite lanky/Skinny.

 

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):http://imgur.com/wJ7Ua7Y

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-Powergaming definition is incorrect.

-No server lore.

-You cannot have been chosen as a daemon's champion.

-Orc raid killing parents/village is incredibly over used and very cliché.

-Odd, magical pendants aren't a thing, and over all, your character is very Gary Sue.

 

You may reapply in 24 hours. Pm me over the forums if you have any questions.

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