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[GuiguiEagle 1]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: GuiguiEagle

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Do not change your username to anything which could be offensive, vulgar, or inflammatory, on any LotC medium. Breaking this rule will result in a ban of 30 days (the amount of time it takes to change your name via Mojang). Impersonating a player/staff member will result in a more severe punishment.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): I understand all rules

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? From Google I was looking for a good server.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: when you act as the personality of you imaginary character and think like him.

What is metagaming?:  Using your knowledge instead of the characters one.

What is Powergaming?: When someone forces an action to an other player and without making him reacts.

E.G: The Warrior walks up to the bandit, slice him up (instant kill) and walk away.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Guigui Forerty

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race:  Wood elf

Character’s age: 125

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

 

 Guigui Forerty was a normal elf living in the wood, he lived with his family, alone in the forest, he was a fine archer, he used to train a lot with his father and his brother, they work in a farm far away from any danger or war, until  an army of orc came fearlessly and burn down the farm and murder his parent and kindnapt his brother for dinner. He was too scared to do anything he just hide into a bush. From that day on he's only point of life was to revenge them. He did not have any food or water , after a long time  he felt nauseous and fell.  He woke up in Aegis the capital of the elven nation. He soon recovered and ask  who saved him it was a passing merchant with the name of Nutthead. He thank this merchant a lot.

 He realized he don't have any money, he decided to find a job.

 

He knows that his best bet was to go into the army, and he did. He soon became one of their best warrior, he was a very good archer. After years of training he became general. Soon after war was declared again against the orcs, he knew it was his chance to revenge his family he went to the battle field . He got seriously injured and fainted. When he woke up their were nobody and nothing left there. He asked him self how many time did he sleep. But he never  knew.  He did not have any armor on, no weapon and nothing left. (that when I come in). 

 

Personality Traits: strong , but weak against orcs.

 

Ambitions: to revenge his family and to become that best archer.

 

Strengths/Talents: Great archer and farmer

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Fear of orcs and can cause temporary nausea.

 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Height:2 metres Weight: 86 kg.short, brown hair.has big ears. Copper eyes.

 

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://www.minecraft...51/guiguieagle/

 

Thank you for taking the time to read my application. You guys/gals are great. Please accept me I am a massive fan of Lord of the ring and Minecraft, to play this server is my dream.

 

 

[mitto 2312]

 

Please link ALL past denials.

 

Your biography is cliché. Revenge against orcs for killing family is remarkably overdone. Please apply with a biography that's a bit more original.

 

Aegis isn't the capital of the Elven nation it's a realm that existed over 300 IC years ago.

 

With that being said it's the only lore point, please include more server lore in your biography.

http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Front+Page

 

There are a few grammar mistakes littered throughout, maybe just go through and fix them up please.

 

'Strong' isn't a personality trait. Something like 'Aggressive' would be. Same with 'Weak to Orcs' it's just not a personality trait.

 

Your character is too tall for a Wood Elf. Please keep it in a 5'6 - 6'0 range. Keep in mind 2 meters in 6'5

[mitto 2312]

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