[Denied] My Application

[firsttimegamer 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:Not_a_Youtuber

How old are you?:16

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):No

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:You may not play as a noble or an important character

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?:Youtube

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:Playing a character and being in another world for the time you roleplay.

What is metagaming?:Using player knowledge to assist you and not using character knowledge

What is powergaming?:Skipping out on all of the lore and roleplaying to try to get your character more powerful.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Jameak Hammerfell

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Human(Highlander)

Character’s age:27

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):Born in the city of Vekaro in The Fringe, in early 1458. My mother was Shelin Hammerfell and father Tirion Hammerfell. I also had an older brother named Nico who was born in the year 1449. My father was one of those desperate to find a way out of the Fringe and often went on trips searching for a way out. My mother had contracted Khorvad's Grip so my brother Nico had to take care of my mother and I. Nico told me never to go near mother. One day Nico awoke me from my sleep and I saw a bright light coming from the sky, he told me to follow him. We packed our stuff and began to leave when i realized we had forgotten mother. I told Nico and he said, 'She cannot come, we cannot spread the disease to other realms'. I tried to stop him but he picked me up as i screamed for mother. That was the last time I ever saw her. Once walking through the light I realized it was just Nico and I. I asked Nico where father was and he responded with, 'I do not know". For months we adapted to our new home, Severski and looked for our father, hoping he had made it through. Over time we gave up on looking for him until the hope of him returning was zero. Nico became my new father, he took care of me, he bought me a bow and bought lessons for me from a great teacher, Master Zareo. After a few years I was getting used to my new life, until the Deep Freeze hit. Nico and I were taken to the port city, Tuv Aviv, where they started to load people onto boats. By this time I was 20 and my own man and Nico was 36. As the first few boats started to get loaded up something attacked us, what i had believed for most of my life was a myth, a dragon! As our ship sailed away we put the women and children below deck whereas Nico and I were told to stay above deck and fight the beast. I shot the flying worm with my bow, named Ghallder. Our boat was one of the few able to withstand the dragons attack. When we made it away from the dragon we cheered and cried. We sailed until we reached our new home realm, Athera. Upon arriving Nico and I knew we had to find a place to live. WE searched until we found the city of Montfort. We decided it was good a city as any to live so we settled down, sharing the same home. Nico and I started a business, I would hunt game for meat and pelts while Nico would run the shop and sell them. Business was blooming so we stayed in business for the better part of our lives. In 1505, I was 47 and Nico was 63. Nico decided he wanted to do more with his life than run a stand so, he took his sword, some clothes and food, and told me he was leaving. He left me the home and shop. I closed the shop for many days as I cried over his leaving, he was like a father to me. As years passed I began to feel better about myself until something happened. One of my regular costumers walked in crying. I asked her what was wrong and she told me her son had just left town. He was 18 so being of a young age he decided it would be best for him to become an nomad. As I listened to her story I realized that I dont want to stay in this town either, work as a shopkeeper and hunter until I die. I decided I must leave as well. At 51 years of age I gave my home and stand to a good friend of mine, Barkley. I took Ghallder and other possessions and head off south, not knowing what lay ahead of me...

 

Personality Traits: Loyal, trusting, friendly and caring

Ambitions:I wish to get as much adventure as I can out of the 70 or so years I have left.

Strengths/Talents: Marksmanship and ability to talk to people. Also very fit for my age due to continued work-outs.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Trustworthy to a fault, choose friends over myself.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):I am 5'11" in height and weigh a healthy 180 lbs. Black hair color and bright green eyes. Tan skin due to exposure to the sun and built body to vigorous excersize.

[mitto 2312]

Your biography is littered with lore, but...

Your character is way to young to have been born in the Fringe. He would easily be 60+ years old. It was around 1 IRL year ago.

 

Your biograph is one big block of text, which makes it hard to tell where the story goes. Break it up into paragraphs. It makes it easier to tell what you're talking about.

 

Check your dates are accurate. If you log onto the server as a wandering soul you can do /date to check the current date of the server.

 

Please add a skin to your application. A guide can be found here:

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/51343-how-to-obtain-your-skin-screenshot/

If you're still having trouble shoot me a PM.

 

You can re apply in 24 hours.

[mitto 2312]

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