[Denied] [Pending] Death's Application

[deathkamon 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: deathkamon

How old are you?: 15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No metagaming.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?

Brother (Doomkamon)

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Creating a persona and playing said persona in a given world.

What is metagaming?: Knowing something ICly and using it OOCly or the other way around.

What is powergaming?: Becoming absurdly more powerful than others or claiming oneself as that.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Foctrus Fraichin

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Highland human

Character’s age: 30

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

When Foctrus was five, he was caught attacking a Gronkkston orcish soldier who
was dragging his parents away because they attempted to steal him

for food. Foctrus was then placed into a slave encampment located
underground in the mines. He was constantly wearing a bone mask, which was
nailed onto his face by the orcs. The reason that Foctrus couldn't
talk was because there were so many people watching him, not the

mask itself that prevented him from speaking. The only time where
it would be safe to talk to someone was during feeding time. He would be sent into a
very crowded chamber of the encampment where he and all the
other thirty slaves were forced to go to eat. Foctrus talked to a person
during eating time who was nicknamed "Two-scar".

Two-scar planned an uprising in the slave pit. He planned

this ever since seven years ago when the several others, including
Foctrus and Two-scar came to the slave camp. After a few days of telling
the slaves about this, the uprising began. Two people would distract the
guards while one took the keys and free the others. After doing this, the
slaves charged the guards, killed them, and took all their stuff. As soon
as the slaves got to the entrance, though, about twenty of the thirty slaves
immediately fell due to arrows. Foctrus was twelve when the uprising began.
He was enslaved for seven years with Two-scar in the encampment. Foctrus
got some money by doing paid labor, mainly being a blacksmith.

Personality Traits: He's very straight forwards about what he says. It's usually considered very difficult to get Foctrus in a happy mood.

Ambitions: Foctrus wishes to begin an underground bandit organization, and he plans to spread word of the organization throughout.

Strengths/Talents: He knows how to use hammers and bludgeoning weapons well, due to his time he spent as a blacksmith. 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: He has little to no experience with mounts of any kind.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): He's six and a half feet tall, weighing at around a hundred and eighty pounds. He is also very muscular, and his head is bald. He mostly wears rags on himself.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here)

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[_Stigwig 1510]

Applicant failed to make the required changes in the 24 hour time period, they may apply again after 24 hours have passed.

 

There are a number of areas you need to improve on before I can accept you:

 

- Gronkkston no longer exists, and did not 25 in-game years ago. You need to use up to date server lore.

 

- You need to include at least three pieces of modern server lore, you should use the wiki to find these. 

 

You have 24 hours to make the changes, if you need help and/or when you have made the edits please send me a PM.

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Moved to Denied Application Forum.