[Denied] Finding_Emo's Application!

[finding_emo 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:  finding_emo

How old are you?: 14 

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes i am aware.

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):  Yes i have, - https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/129630-my-application-form/#entry1243452

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes ive read them and i agree to them. 

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:  No overpowered Characters

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):  No, none at all.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?   I searched in google "Lotr minecraft rp" and "Lord Of The Craft" Appeared.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Acting as another person or character in a different world eg roleplaying gandalf in minecraft.

What is metagaming?:Using knowledge in a gaming universe gained from experience or external issues, matters ect.

What is powergaming?: It is when an emote is used which forces the other player to act according to the emote. its basically Forcing actions on other players for example : Stabbing an oponent without giving them the oppertunity to *block attack* practically making sure your emote is fast without leaving an opening for them to resist or deny the action.

 

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Aragoren

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Dwarve

Character’s age: 20

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): 

 

Aragoren, a mountain dwarf a battle-born warrior a man of many talents fit for war and adventure. But Aragoren was not always so noble nor brave he was once a simple Dwarf whom shared shelter with family strong and warm and that is where the story truly begins.....

 

It was a simple day in his small residing settlement as Aragoren returned home with his mother bounding into his fathers room to place a  vase of flowers next to his bed in sweet hope of his recovery his mother could not look nor listen to Aragoren's words of worry she went outside to collect some supplies from the local market as time passed she returned to send Aragoren to bed he was hessitant but gave in to exhaustion and retreated to his room to rest.

 

*BANG* A loud smash awoke Aragoren he lepped out of his covers and hid inside his closet as to evade whatever may have broken the silence, he creaked the closet door open just to peak out in hope to see his mother returning home or his father healed and steady on foot. But this was no Dwarf nor Man or Elf......an a masked thief had broken into his once loving home Aragoren was shocked as to see a blood stained glove drag his fathers corpse out into the winter night.Moments later he grabbed his fathers long sword Theroius an ancient blade passed down by his Great Great Grandfather and sprinted after the disgusting entity slicing and hacking at its figure, with swift hand he lunged and the blade pierced through its body and it fell to the ground *THUD* But all was too late the village had fallen pillage to an vicious bandit assault Aragoren fled to the lands east of Malinor in hope of savior he travelled far lands in search of a home leaving behind the pages of his past.

Aragoren travels lands in search of vengeance and liberation.

 

His journeys took him across many lands slaying all whom may defy his choices and prevent his quest of reckoning, he was more than a mere dwarf he was a warrior broken and hurt light alone and lost in an apitimy of darkness he would not let anyone stop him nor let anyone postpone his vast vengance.

 

 

 

Personality Traits: Hatred for all non Dwarf races, Considerate, Brave, Bold

Ambitions: Wishes to avenge his father and mothers death.

Strengths/Talents: Incredibly skilled with long swords with very strong arms.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Lacks in knowledge of math and social skills along with little to no patience.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):  He has long black hair with blue eyes and is of medium build yet swift on his feet.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): Here is my Aragoren skin --- http://i.imgur.com/WyIBjjE.png

[Fireheart 2777]

Greetings applicant, after reviewing your application I have placed you on Pending for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You have 24 hours to make these changes. Failing to do so will result in this application being denied and thus, having to wait 24 hours before re-applying.

 

Your definition of Powergaming is vague, please expand on it by referring to this link here for guidance.

 

Your lore is incorrect and dates back to a time when your character would not be allowed. Please use more current lore!

 

Please lengthen your Biography out to make it longer. I am looking for around the size of two well sized paragraphs. You can incorporate some of the causes of your strengths or weaknesses in their with detail or branch off on more information about your character.

 

Please include Server Lore into your application. Your racial Sub-Wiki can be found on the Wiki. It will help you get started in incorporating Server Lore such as certain places, to wars or even significant events to state just a few examples!

 

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to send me a PM! As a reminder you have 24 hours to respond to me in a PM and/or fix your application based off the information and request above. In addition to what was stated above I reserve the right to add or remove requested edits needed for the application. Good luck applicant!

You have been denied for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You may re-apply after 24 hours have passed.

 

Applicant failed to make all requested edit(s) to the application within the given 24 hour period.

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to send me a PM! I will be more than willing to help point you in the correct direction and I highly recommend taking into consideration the advise and issue(s) with your application that I have stated above.

[Fireheart 2777]

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