ThatShadow164 0 Share Posted July 9, 2015 Out-Of-Character Information Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication! What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:ThatShadow164 How old are you?:16 Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):i have not Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes What’s the rule you agree with the most?:Rule #8 on role-play Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):i understand the rules How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?A friend Definitions Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! What is roleplaying?:participation or the act of a person in a particular role What is metagaming?:a action that someone uses that goes past the rules What is power gaming?:a style of interacting with a game or game like systems like "role-playing" In-Character Information Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play. Character’s name:Dean Weatherford Character’s gender:Male Character’s race:Human Character’s age:17 Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):Dean was interested of becoming a warrior or fighter as a child like his father "lloyd." The day his father died he had been traumatized and filled with anger. he left home at age 15 to find his fathers killer. he was founded by a half-blood named Akashi. he thought dean not to let anger control his life. so he trained him to be what he always wanted to be...a fighter. at the age of 16 he finished training. he then left Akashi and went back to his home. when he came back it was empty and broken down. he saw a sign on his door saying "we know all." he knew it was the race that killed his father. he left his village to go find his village/fathers killer. He is still looking Personality Traits:Fun.Funny,Strong,Fast,Has Secret powers he doesn't know about, smart,doesn't talk much Ambitions:To Find his village/fathers killer and stop him/them from killing anyone else Strengths/Talents: He Can Make His Eyes Turn Red In Anger and use fire.Can use both arms in combat Weaknesses/Inabilities:his weakness is a stab in the back or arm. he will get weak if they do it rapidly or a lot Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):Blue/Red eyes,Brown hair, 5.6 130 pounds Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overland 349 Share Posted July 9, 2015 Unfortunately your application has been denied, please reapply after 24 hours with the requested changes made. Your definitions are very similar to those found on Wikipedia (especially your power-gaming one.) Doing so again will result a ban from applying. Having your character's father die for no reason is unoriginal, please remove or change it greatly, the same with having his only ambition to find the killer. You cannot apply with a character under the age of 18. Your biography is too short and also has no server lore; server lore (such as town names and events) can be found in the following wiki pages: http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Athera http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Vailor What secret powers do you mean? Magic or lore-breaking powers are not permitted. I have a few concerns with your strengths and weaknesses: You cannot use fire or have magic without learning on the server. It is strange for his eyes to go 'red in anger' please change this. Everyone has the weaknesses of being stabbed in the arm or back, so please change and expand on your weaknesses. This guide shows you how to obtain your skin screenshot. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overland 349 Share Posted July 9, 2015 Moved to Denied Application Forum. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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