[Denied] The Third Application Lets Pray I Get Accepted ( ;____;)

[hudsun202 233]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:superAawsome

How old are you?:13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):i am aware and take full responsibility

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):no this is my first

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes i have

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: the rule were no one can make them self a son of a famous person and have to do every thing legit

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules) :no rules make me confused

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?

i was looking for roleplay severs and then i found this one.

What is roleplaying?:Roleplaying is when you pretend to live in a world of fiction and act out of it.

What is metagaming?:It's an out of character action where like they use information they are not supposed to know.

What is powergaming?:Its basically doing things you wouldnt do in real life like say i am ganna rip your skin out and wear it as a coat that is unusual in life and could not be done.

Character’s name: Alex Holdenford

Character’s gender: male

Character’s race: Human 

Character’s age:19

Biography: It all starts like this so Alex is in the forest picking out apples by climbing trees.But all of a sudden he sees a vision of his village being burned so he falls off the tree and runs to the village and in shock he sees the 

 

village in flames his friends and his love are all gone.And as soon as he moans a orc comes and nearly chops alex's head.Alex in fright runs as fast as he can he runs and doesnt look back and then he trips and falls off a cliff and 

 

lands in a stream.He awakes to find him self almost drowning he quickly swims up he sees a dock he swims to it finding a fisher man the fisher man suprised alex asks the fisher man if he can know were he the fisher man hands him a 

 

ruined book and it tells him a guide of the area and he sees th labeled word Athera and he is shocked happy to find out the fact he is in a mystic land.But knowing about what happend before he vouded to find who made the attack at the 

 

village and slay them so he askes the fisher man for directions to the nearest village and he hands him a medium map.And then alex walks there and makes it to the village and begins his quest but he needs to train and find some answers 

 

before he travels.(And thats how he gets to the spawn) 

Personality Traits: Brave-ish Clumsy and sweet 

Ambitions: Make people happy 

Strengths/Talents: He is a average Nord but he can master all the arts if so desired like Magic Stealth and Might 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: he is weak to depression when he is let down and knows when he is ganna die he bows down and comes forth and accepts his death.

Appearance:He is 6' 0" tall and his eyes are black and wears a a brown jacket with 2 undershirt a white one and a red one and weres 2 pairs of pants incase of dirtyness and has a brown hat heres a link 

 

http://imageshack.co...7541/b2lzIH.png

 

Thanks for reading my third try of application i really hope i get accepted i really wanna roleplay it has been a side dream to do so in a minecraft sever.

[Harri 4815]

Unfortunately, you’ve been denied.

The following reasons behind this are as follows:

• Your power-gaming definition isn't quite right. Next time, correct it and put the right definition.
• Your bio lacks lore, on top of not really making much sense. You seem to jump from point to point without much in-between detail. Also, I'm not sure exactly how your character would've gotten the exact vision of what was happening at the exact moment it was. On top of that, you couldn't of travelled to Athera- you would've already been in Athera. Plus, we've now moved to Vailor, the new continent. Go over the wiki to find suitable Lore pieces to work into your bio, and try to make the story make more sense. It's a representation of your character, make it explain his story and show how he's developed to what he is now.
• Orcs burning down your village is quite cliched and over-used. Try think up a more original story to have for your character.
   

If you’d like any help doing your application once more, feel free to contact me. I’ll happily try and lend my assistance.

You may re-apply in 24 hours.

[Harri 4815]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.