[Denied] Whitelist Application - Itzao - Eglandir

[Eglandir 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: My minecraft name is: ItzAo

How old are you?:I am 12, but i am turning 13 the 19. August

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes i  am.

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes i have read and agreed to all the rules.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Rule 2 in Roleplay Rules Category: You need to keep in you're role all time!

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): I have understud all the rules.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I searched on YouTube For: Minecraft Rpg server, and found a video, it looked fun so i wanted to try it.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is when you are in another character then you're real life "character" the Roleplay world mostly is in a Fantasy World with overnatural features.

What is metagaming?:Using information you only got out of character and was never told in the roleplay

What is powergaming?: Here is an example; Eglandir goes over to the man, pulls his knife, stabs him and leaves. All in one emote, without the other man to do anything about it.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Eglandir Thordin

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Wood Elf

Character’s age:59

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

 

Eglandír thórdin was born in 1456, he lived with his parents and he's littlesister until 1468 where som orcs from Raguk came marchering by, they burnt family Thordins house down. they took he's sister stabbed Eglandírs parents and left him alone in the ruins of he's house with a missing left eye.

 

An old man from laurelin was hearing the noice and was hiding in the trees, until the orcs where  gone.

The old man came over to Eglandír and took him up in he's arms. He could hear he's pulse, Eglandír was only fainted, but he's life was still in danger. He caried Eglandír up on he's horse and rode the long way to laurelin. Finally he arived at the old mans house he rushed inside, and pulled everything of the table. Eglandír woke op and whispered Grandpa  to the old man and he was gone again.

 

Eglandír grew up with an ambition of revenge over the orcs. He loved combat, when the others were working in the fields he sneaked away and trained. That meant he got punished all the time. He loved he's grandpa, but he died in 1513. He always wanted to be the best of the best, that meant he was a really bad looser the few times he loosed he always became angy and walked away.

 

 

Personality Traits: Has brown hair, he always wants to be nice, Never give up if its something he likes and he defends everyone he loves.

Ambitions: To get revenge over the orcs and become a great Warrior.

Strengths/Talents: Good with Combat(especially bow) and leading

Weaknesses/Inabilities: bad at Mining and Farming

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 175cm tall

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):http://imgur.com/ZXu3IaF

[Lvke 1000]

-Extremely unbalanced character traits.

-Clichéd, over used backstory.

-Raguk is not a real place.

-There are elements of this app that seem almost as though an experienced player made it, and that there may have been plagiarism, but at the same time, the rest of the biography seems to disprove that.

-Your grammar, punctuation and spelling could use a lot of work.

 

You may reapply after 24 hours have passed. Feel free to PM me over the forums if you have any questions.

[Lvke 1000]

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