[Denied] Application #2

[Halfblooded Prince 0]

BEFORE YOU EVEN ASK: No, I am not one of those 50% which characters are assassins with a dark hood, glowing eyes and sad past!

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Francisco_Jr

How old are you?: 21, messed up in the first app.

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): I hope this is what you want!  https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/129494-application/ 

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: I agree with the rules

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: You must start from scratch, so don't bother starting as a mage or a prince!

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): Nope

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Banned on other server for crashing the creative server, so I remembered that in the More Player Models mod page someone said he uses it on this server

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Creating you own experience with a storyline inside a pre-made game

What is metagaming?: Knowing something but still acting like you don't know that because your character doesn't, good luck translating what I just said!

What is powergaming?: Trying to get positive results in a conflict with other player without giving him a chance

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Kher'Athri

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Dark Elf

Character’s age: 20

 

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): He was born in Ker'Nor in year of 1468, just after entering the Athera. His father was a military veteran (known by filling a orc head with explosive powder and throwing it into one of enemy's camps), and his mother remains unknown. At the age of 7, an orc assassin was sent to kill his father so he had to flee with his cousins to the Sky Temple. There, they were left with the monks next 3 years, studying the ancient history, learning the arts and getting to know some secrets. Out of all things they heard, the most exciting thing they wanted to learn was using magic. They always dreamed of making impossible things, but they weren't allowed until becoming fully mature. After 3 months, he heard horrible news: his older brother was murdered by the assassin! His rage became so unstable that he, practicing sword arts in the forest, came across an camp with orcs sleeping. What he did is nothing more than burning them alive! But the monks weren't happy with that. Actually, he was forbidden to leave the temple next 5 years! He sworn revenge on the assassin and, while everyone was sleeping, ran away from the temple. He was running as fast as he could and finally, found Ker'Nor. Even though the blood was dripping off his hand, he managed to take a refuge at the graveyard. Next morning, he was just shocked: The grave he was lying next to was his father's! Just a moment later, he started hallucinating. He heard screams around himself, whenever he looked into the water it turned to blood and even the clouds looked like horrified souls. Surprisingly, his uncle found him fainted. But Kher'Athri managed to start a new life. He joined the military and next 5 years only thing he heard was soldiers finding more and more Necromancers, Liches and Shades. He never heard of those beings earlier, so he came to the city library at night to find the one book to rule them all: The book describing Dark Magic. An absurd thinking came to the young Elf: Why couldn't he use the Dark Arts and still be a not-evil person? Why couldn't he turn invisible in middle of the battle so he can give help to the prisoners? That's when he buyed supplies, put on a backpack and started another adventure...

 

Personality Traits: Can be rude, kinda lonely, creative and smart

Ambitions: Wants to learn the Dark Magic and use it on the light side, always wanted to explore the whole world of Athera

Strengths/Talents: Fast, has good eyesight, can run long distances without stopping to gasp, and he has a special talent for provocating people :P

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Headaches when hearing too many loud noises, possible hallucinations

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Height: 6'4", Weight: 120lbs, Eye Color: Crimson, Hair Color: Obsidian black with silver parts, Skin Color: Dark Gray

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): I have the skin (Not very good at shading) but I don't seem to be able to open the 1.6.2_forge version folder using WinRar so I can change the steve texture, and I don't have premium mc! :*(

 

Let's hope I get approved!

[Fireheart 2777]

Greetings applicant, after reviewing your application I have placed you on Pending for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You have 24 hours to make these changes. Failing to do so will result in this application being denied and thus, having to wait 24 hours before re-applying.

 

Your definition of Powergaming is incorrect, please refer to the link here for guidance.

 

Please lengthen your Biography out to make it longer. I am looking for around the size of two well sized paragraphs. You can incorporate some of the causes of your strengths or weaknesses in their with detail or branch off on more information about your character.

 

Please include Server Lore into your application. Your racial Sub-Wiki can be found on the Wiki. It will help you get started in incorporating Server Lore such as certain places, to wars or even significant events to state just a few examples!

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to send me a PM! As a reminder you have 24 hours to respond to me in a PM and/or fix your application based off the information and request above. In addition to what was stated above I reserve the right to add or remove requested edits needed for the application. Good luck applicant!

You have been denied for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You may re-apply after 24 hours have passed.

 

Applicant failed to make all requested edit(s) to the application within the given 24 hour period.

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to send me a PM! I will be more than willing to help point you in the correct direction and I highly recommend taking into consideration the advise and issue(s) with your application that I have stated above.

[Fireheart 2777]

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