[Denied] Bang_Buster's Application

[BangBuster 1]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Bang_Buster

How old are you?: 15 Years old.

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes.

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Cyber bullying is strictly prohibited, and will not be condoned in any shape or form. If you promote, or take part in cyber bullying amongst the community, you will be punished just as severely.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): None.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? My friend (TheMasker).

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Doing what ever you can do in real life in a specific time in specific place.

What is metagaming?: Mixing OOC chat in IC chat.

What is powergaming?: Forcing unrealistic actions agaist other players.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Baldwin

Character’s gender: Male.

Character’s race: Human.

Character’s age: 120

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Born in Felsen, without a father, his mother died after 16 year. A nice man, found Baldwin, gave him a place to live in and food. For 5 years Bladwin lived in the house, Baldwin started to hunt animals, and fight evil people. He became a good swordsman and professional bowman. One day, some bandits robbed the old nice man, and killed him. Baldwin wanted to revenge, he asked other people, people got robbed by those bandits and got clues. Some years later he found the bandits and the bandit's base.

 

For two mounths he prepared himself to raid them. He trained alot with bows and swords, and daggers. The day arrived, and Baldwin was a professional warrior. He went to base, quietly sneaked in, and found four men, sitting arrond a table, and talking. Baldwin was mad, he took out his blade, rushed into the room, and started to fight the bandits. One man took a big battleaxe, but before he hit Baldwin, he died. Baldwin withdrawed his bow, shoot one male, and killed another man. The last man, stared at Baldwin. Baldwin faced the last man agaist the wall, stabbed him six times in the back, the bandit died immediately, after the last man died, Baldwin ran out of the base, and decided to live clean life, without deaths, to build a house and to be farmer.

Personality Traits: "Revanger", friendly person, willing to do everything to complete his designation.

Ambitions: To be farmer, sell the goods and live normal life.

Strengths/Talents: He has good "aim" as bowman, he's not afraid to fight felons.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Anything can hurt people he know and love.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Brown hair, usualy wearing brown pants and shirt. He has strap around the torso. 6 ft height, 196 lbs.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://www.upload.ee/image/4832114/2015-07-10_14.09.25.png

 

[Harri 4815]

 

Unfortunately, you’ve been denied.

The following reasons behind this are as follows:

• Your definitions are wrong. Re-do them if you could, please.
• Humans only live to about 100, so being 120 wouldn't work. Also, you wouldn't have been able to have been born in Felsen, due to it only being around 1-2 years so far. Read over the wiki and re-read your Lore, finding more suitable and correct pieces to incorporate.
• Revenge in your story is rather cliched. You might want to think of a more original idea for your story.
• Your weaknesses and strengths don't seem very balanced. Try balance them out some more by subtracting or adding to the appropriate side.
   

If you’d like any help doing your application once more, feel free to contact me. I’ll happily try and lend my assistance.

You may re-apply in 24 hours.

[Harri 4815]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.