[Denied] Bob's Application

[Bob_the_Great 1]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:Bob_the_Great

How old are you?:13

Are you aware the server is Pg-13:Yes, I am aware and will make an attempt to keep my role-playing clean.

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):Technicaly I have not, but I am correcting my last one, so yes.https://www.lordofth...bs-application/

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes I have agreed to the rules and will follow them.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:I agree most with the rule against cyber-bullying.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?:No, the rules are cleary written and understandable.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?:I found out from a friend who plays on the server, after hearing about it I became interested.

 

Definitions

 

 

What is roleplaying?:Role-playing is an act where people pretend to be characters and create a story.

What is metagaming?:Metagaming is the act of using outside materials to influence the way the game is played.

What is powergaming?:Powergaming is when you create an action and assume that it is successful without another player responding, therefore not giving them the freedom to act in their own way.

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name:Robert Cairnath (care-nuth)

Character’s gender:male

Character’s race:human

Character’s age:57

Biography:In the year 1468 was born to a wealthy and proud family in Athera, Oren, I knew little of my father, he had died in an accident when I was only 2 years old. The man I remember instead was my godfather, henry allum, he made sure that I studied combat and tactics to eventually fulfill my father's wishes and become a great warrior. Of course I joined the military when I was of age and began making a name for myself as an esteemed general. I had fought mainly in the war with the Silver enclave  and Urguan, fighting many battles unscathed. Unfortunately, my luck ran out after a severe injury I got from a battle at the young age of 37, I had to have my leg amputated and replaced with a suitable wooden one. Following that incident and the closing of the war with Urguan I decided to retire with my family in a handsome mansion far away from prying eyes. I lived a peaceful life for many years, never going out of the house much, except on occasional trips to banquets and parties. On one such trip I returned to see that my house had been ransacked and burned down, I grabbed what I could and tried to save my family, however, no one survived. so I went on the road to chase after the thieves  who ruined my life, with only the thought of revenge keeping me going. After a few months of traveling I finally found their hideout, but as I looked in I saw that it was ransacked, with blood everywhere and dead bodies lining the floor. It had appeared their had been a great battle, perhaps the local law keeper had found their hideout, I hoped at least that there were a few of the raiders left so that I could take revenge. After what seemed like nearly an hour of carefully making my way trough, I had gazed upon something move, a body, perhaps one of the men of whom I sought. I knelt down towards the person to see what it was, and saw that it was certainly a man, he wore fine cotton clothing and iron armor covering much of his body and had a large bruise on his head, perhaps that was what knocked him unconscious. So I grabbed him firmly by the shoulders and shook him (Not taking much care to be gentle, he may have been a raider after all) so that would wake up. After a while he finally stirred and opened his eyes, he was a little dazed at first but he eventually came to. When he woke up he asked who I was, but I denied him an answer  and asked him first, after a little while he told me that his name was Canen tillet and that he was a soldier in the local militia. I asked him how many raiders their were and what they looked like, he then pointed out to me that all the raiders were dead, after a few minutes of wallowing in my disappointment, I left him to own devices and went out on my way. As I came to the nearest village I saw a man taking down a bounty sign, but I looked more closely and saw something rather shocking, on the sign was the name Canen tillet, under the name it said "raider chief", I quickly went to the militia leader and asked him who had died in the fight, he told me that everyone had survived, and that there was no such person with his party. After the conversation I sat on the ground, thinking that I had to track him down and avenge my family. I searched far and wide for almost two years before the evacuation to Vailor, reluctant to go, I had boarded a ship and arrived on the new land to search once again...                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             Personality Traits:I am charismatic, smart, hardworking, and a skilled warrior, and I hate any man who breaks the law.

Ambitions:My only ambition is to track down an outlaw and make him suffer for his crimes.

Strengths/Talents:I am a cunning and a strong warrior, and I am a skilled and charismatic speaker who can easily bend people to his way.

Weaknesses/Inabilities:I have a low patience and can easily get carried away, I also am extremely stubborn.

Appearance:I have wide shoulders and a short brown beard with a few small specks of grey, and I am also rather short for such a warrior of my status. I wear fine clothing covered with fancy silver armor, on top of that I wear a small, cheap cloak, and for footwear I have a pair of aged, muddy leather boots that fit me well.

Appearance:http://s300.photobuc...mislym.png.html

[Fireheart 2777]

Greetings applicant, after reviewing your application I have placed you on Pending for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You have 24 hours to make these changes. Failing to do so will result in this application being denied and thus, having to wait 24 hours before re-applying.

 

Your definition of Powergaming is vague, please expand on it by referring to this link here for guidance.

 

 

Your lore is dated back to a time when your character would not be alive. Please use more current lore!

 

Please include Server Lore into your application. Your racial Sub-Wiki can be found on the Wiki. It will help you get started in incorporating Server Lore such as certain places, to wars or even significant events to state just a few examples!

 

 

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to send me a PM! As a reminder you have 24 hours to respond to me in a PM and/or fix your application based off the information and request above. In addition to what was stated above I reserve the right to add or remove requested edits needed for the application. Good luck applicant!

You have been denied for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You may re-apply after 24 hours have passed.

 

Applicant failed to make all requested edit(s) to the application within the given 24 hour period.

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to send me a PM! I will be more than willing to help point you in the correct direction and I highly recommend taking into consideration the advise and issue(s) with your application that I have stated above.

[Fireheart 2777]

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