[Denied] Fredtheranger's 2Nd Application

[KingFr3d 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: FredTheRanger

How old are you?: 13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): Once, exactly 24 hours ago.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: I have

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: All players must be in character at all times (except when OOC messaging in OOC chat)

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No they are all clear.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I searched "Medieval role-play servers" into Google.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is when a player acts and speaks according to what their character would do, and can be altered by other player's actions and by context.

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is doing things in a role play situation that your character would have no physical way of knowing/ be able to do.

What is powergaming?: Doing something without allowing another player the freedom to act of their own free will e.g. The Guard and the Crook scenario.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Frederic Tybout

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 23

Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Frederic was born in the Reformed Kingdom of Oren, to parents who were merchants. They were killed by a bandit who had mastered magic, and so Frederic was left alone, wandering through the streets, mingling with the poor of Oren. He spent 4 years of his life in the gutter, and would never forget the people he had met, the people he had lost, and the fact that his parents had been killed by magic.

   At the age of 11, Frederic was found and adopted by a retired mercenary. This mercenaries' wife had been killed in the slaughter of 1516, and as such he had no children of his own. He took Frederic in, training him in the art of the blacksmiths, and the way of the sword and now. Frederic became a master of the anvil, skilled with a blade and proficient with a bow. When the mercenary died, Frederic was 18. He inherited what little money they had, and set off, determined to use his skills to help the poor and to eliminate all evil users of magic. He spent most of his time wandering the land of Vailor, and never hesitates to help a troubled soul, even if he risks his own.

Personality Traits: Kind, loving, proud, strong in battle

Ambitions: To create an equal world.

Strengths/Talents: Combat, Generosity, Master with an anvil

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Too trustful, hates magic

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Has brown hair, is around 6 foot 2, and weighs 120kg (264.555lbs) 

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://i.imgur.com/ni5knu3.png?1]

[Mephistophelian 977]

This Application is:

 

 

For the following reason(s):

 

-Biography has a cliche of 'parents killed by bandits'. Too many people use that when applying here, and nearly all are denied.

 

-You didn't link your previous application as required in the fourth question.

 

-Your character's weaknesses are not true weaknesses, nor do they balance out against the strengths.

 

-Your definition of meta gaming is off, and your definition of power gaming uses a scenario with no example of it, at all (tip: make your own example).

 

You have [time] to wait until you can reapply.

If you have any questions or comments, please feel free to PM me!

[Mephistophelian 977]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.