[Denied] Rufflikerex's Third Application

[Rufflikerex 3]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: rufflikerex

 

How old are you?: 14

 

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes I am aware.

 

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): yes.

 

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: I have read and agreed to all the rules.

 

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No over-powered characters.

 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): Why is the 24-hour Rule for applications so strict?

 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I was searching for a good Role-Play server on google. I was about to give up until I found this server.

 

 

 

Definitions

 

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

 

 

What is roleplaying?: RolePlaying is an activity that involves playing as a creative character while interacting with others in a realistic and imaginative manner.

 

What is metagaming?: Using or creating information that is outside of the game's given information in order to give the player an advantage.

 

What is powergaming?: Using unrealistic actions that make the role-play less fun.

 

 

 

In-Character Information

 

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

 

 

Character’s name: Evangelos (some call him The Shadow)

 

 

 

Character’s gender: Male

 

 

 

Character’s race: Human

 

 

 

Character’s age: 18

 

 

 

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): My name is Evangelos. I've been born in Felsen and I enjoyed my life there. I used to help my father with his farm to help pay for our taxes. He would harvest the crops while I cared for the Animals that lived there. My father would tell me about all the important wars of the past and the history of this world. Once I heard this, I wanted to explore the world. Life was simple, and we both were happy. That is until one day when I was 17 I saw an old man who was crying for help. I panicked because I had never been in this situation! I decided to pick the old man up, I carried him to Felsen and brought him to our Healers. After about 30 minutes, the old man came out of the Healer hut and thanked me for saving his life. He reveiled to me that he was a old retired wizard who was attacked by a few of the undead. He asked me how he could repay me for my efforts, so I asked him if he could possibly teach me the art of magic. He told me that I needed permission to learn magic, he told me to ask the higher power for permission to learn it. I decided I would do that later, but now I prepared my bags and am ready to explore the world! However, I need to practice some swordplay first, so I gathered some weapons and practiced with myself. I needed to be ready for the undead. When I first left, I visited the Cloud Temple and learned about the Monks, but they didn't want me to know too much. When I came back, I had learned my father had died of potato poisoning. He had accidently ate a poisonous potato from the farm. I felt awful. I didn't know what to do. I just stayed in my room, staring. Of course, I wanted to do somthing about it. My fathers dream was to befriend at least one person from each town and city. I decided to follow his dream as a tribute to his memory. I beleived that I had the potential to have relationships between all others. This is where my story ends, nothing much of a story. But I will add to it. Once I step out those gates I will have a better story. Goodbye.

 

 

Personality Traits: Friendly towards friends, but acts calm, uninterested and mysterious when around strangers. He can be very serious.

 

 

 

Ambitions: Wants his father back. Wants someone to help him.

 

 

 

Strengths/Talents: Is great at Evading attacks. Knows swordplay. Great at stalking and sneaking up on people.

 

 

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Although he is great at evading, his defense isn't as good, so he won't last long if he's hit. Has trouble with socializing.

 

 

 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): He has blue eyes. He has Blond hair. He has a blue shirt and green pants. Wears a Pure Black cloak when traveling.

 

 

 

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

 

(Front without Cloak) (Back without Cloak) (Front with Cloak) (Back with Cloak)

[mitto 2312]

Your characters biography is, how do you say; a mess.

 

Your biography is convoluted, it makes no sense, you're use of paragraphing is non existent. It doesn't make sense, it gives me no insight into your character in detail.

 

Please re write your biography, present it properly, make a clear timeline and explain normal things.

 

It's hard to say exactly what's wrong, it just reads like it was written by a 7 year old.

 

Please make the necessary changes.

 

 

You can re apply in 24 hours from the time of this denial.

[mitto 2312]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.