[Denied] Hopper2060 Application 2

[Hopper2060 0]

Out-Of-Character Information
Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!
What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: hopper2060
How old are you?: 14
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes
Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): yes
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: all of them
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? minecraft server list

Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!
What is roleplaying?: is acting as a character would rather than yourself
What is metagaming?: discussing topics based on info your character would have no way of knowing
What is powergaming?: a player presumes their action against another player is sucessful without letting the other player react

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.
Character’s name: 17(given by master) james hopper ( named myself)
Character’s gender: male
Character’s race: human
Character’s age: 256

Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): i was too ypung to remeber my parents i was found in cave by slavers. i was auctioned off to a man who was making a force of trained mercinaries.me and 19 others were trained by warlords, generals, and other mercinaries. by the age of 16 i ran off and worked as a private mercinary.
by the age of 30 i found myself working for a mage in the wild. i was to protect one of his many wives he had. he name was martha and she was one of the most beautiful women ive every see. will the the mage was gone we fell in love bonding on how being forced to be something for someone else. she also loved my adventures of being a mercinary and all the trouble i would get into. when the mage returned he found out and told us to leave and never return. we found a house in the woods and lived there. but as we grew older i did not. i looked the same as when we met. i watched as she died in my arms at 53 with hair all gray. after her burial i went back to the mage to find he had died leaving his servants to care for it. after telling what happened they let me look through his journals. after a long search i found it. he had cursed me to watch her die and live to tell the tale forever. i took out my sword and drove it into my chest. i felt myself go cold the world went dark i could see her but then i snapped awake unijured, not even a scar. i left i search for a cure mage after mage, year after year, age after age but to no prevail. i went to the tavern and began to drink forever. i suddenly herd two men talking about headig to a land full of mystery magic and death. got up and asked if i could join they allowed for a price. i doubled it.

Personality Traits: short tempered, introverted, a little disturbed, loyal

Ambitions: to die and reunite with martha

Strengths/Talents: melee, planning archery

Weaknesses/Inabilities: building, farming, heights, falling in love

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 5ft 7in 175lbs, tanned skin, (before curse) scar from whip on back, numb on right arm from poisioned arrow, scar from assassian on thigh.

 

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