[Denied] My Application :3

[smelltheroses/dr. combine 16]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Alphadogrules

How old are you?:13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yea'.

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):Nope.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No racial names.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): Dont cyberbully. If you're being cyberbullyed get off minecraft. -_-

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Retarded friends.

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

What is roleplaying?: Where you act like you're a character with certain traits, a backstory, clothes, and looks. You act like you're that character and do what you want, and act out certain situations that happen to you or you get yourself in.

What is metagaming?: Useing OOC info to gain IC benifets. Such as, your friend says he knows who stole you're things OOCly and you ask him who it was and he tells you, you then use that info to use it ICly/

What is powergaming?: Forcing actions apon other characters. Such as, Jake throws a punch at the man colliding into his nose sending him onto the ground backwords.

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

Character’s name: Drav'ti

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Elf

Character’s age: 58

Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Drav'it was born in a small village on top of a hill. The village was small only 10 or 20 houses. Drav'ti was born in a small basement in his mothers house. He was very adventorous when he was a young boy, he went into the outskirts of the village figthing snakes, he /always/ wanted to be the good guy. His brother, definatly the bad guy. He captured snakes and put them in his mom's bedroom when she was sleeping. He normally did this when he didnt get his way. Drav'ti spent most of his time outside running, this helped him because fast because he did this until this day. When he was around 15 and he had a plan to leave the house his brother made a giant cage. He had a giant idea of what his brother was doing. He was going to trap something in the cage and release it in his mothers bedroom. He wondered what he did wrong but before he stopped him from capturing something. He heard a noise from within the box. Drav'ti was shocked that his brother had trapped something. He saw his brother open the door, Drav'ti knew what was happening he grabbed his makeshift sword and threw it at his brother. It hit him and he fell down, his brother shook it off opened what was inside closed the door and picked up his sword. He walked over to Drav'ti and hit him on the head. He fell down he went in for another strike and he rolled to the left. Drav'ti ran into the basement and locked it and barricaded the small trapdoor with wood planks.

He then sat there and woke up the next day. He climbed the ladder up the trapped door and then opened the door. Drav'ti looked into his mothers room and saw only dry blood. His father had gone missing too but people said he went somewhere to get ores for a blacksmith. Drav'ti was shocked and he stood in his home to rember whats happening. He had grief for one day and then he rembered his plan to leave his home for good. He swore vengance on his brother and any evil like he wanted too. He went out and got a job and made money. He made enough money after fifty years to try to become a hero.

He ventured out around the same time that daemons started attacking. He was attacked by one a small one and he hit it causing it to flinch, but it was enough for him to escape, he ran away and ran towards a desert. He found new armor and kept venturing on. He decided to go to a grass plane where hopefully he knew most bandits and daemons wheren't. Many years late he learned that the dead have came to the light and knew he was safe from daemons so he decided to back to many places to kill lone thieves and small groups. He had met great people and had fought battles that he had become wounded.

Drav'ti had ditched his armor when he, had found iron elf armor and an iron dagger on a dead elf warrior. As he left he journeyed with food and water. He killed many things for meat and did what he had to to survive. He was going through the desert when as he knew bandits where here. He thought he'd get lucky but he was wrong. He was raided and cut in his left arm so that he couldnt use it, little did he know it'd be permenant the wound. He was left with dark raggy clothes. He thought the best of it that he could use a dagger and kill thieves that are by theirselves. He then made the best of it and learned to be silent in the darkness. He isn't amazing at it so he made mistakes. Drav'ti is now in a new land and he has formed a group, and he is currently at th*ripped out* a*ripped out* hi *ripped out* dventur*ripped out* continue as he *the rest of the pages are now gone and are tattared.* There is a cut on the next page saying "IM COMING!"

Personality Traits: Good, attacks on impulse, friendly, nice, gets angry easily.

Ambitions: To destroy all that is bad and make his mom come back to life.

Strengths/Talents: Runs fast. Very tough rihgt arm, can be silent if he makes no mistakes.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Left arm is very weak. Makes mistakes when he is being silent.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):3'0, Pointy ears, Ragged Clothing, Between pale and tan. Ragged Hat.

(Picture.)

http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/elf-1563186/

[Harri 4815]

 

Unfortunately, you’ve been denied.

The following reasons behind this are as follows:

• Please refrain from using terms like 'my retarded friends'. Whilst it might be in jest or good fun, it doesn't look great on an application and we don't tolerate comments like that when insulting people etc.
• Your biography is very cliche sounding, on top of not really flowing well/making too much sense. On top of that, you've not used any Lore in your bio from what I can see - head over to our wiki on the tab above and read up on racial lore and geographical lore for Vailor, using them to help.
• Daemons aren't just creatures that fly around and casually destroy towns, they're extremely rare to see creatures that have viciously strong powers, including not being very plentiful in the way you describe them.

 

As for the don't cyberbully rule - I don't see why it should confuse you. It's simple, don't harass people over the internet on a Minecraft server. And whilst it's all well and good to say 'just log off' that means that people aren't getting to enjoy the server, something they obviously want to do due to playing here.

 

If you’d like any help doing your application once more, feel free to contact me. I’ll happily try and lend my assistance.

You may re-apply in 24 hours.

[Harri 4815]

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