[Denied] I Would Like To Apply

[Chetos101 0]

what’s your Minecraft Account Name?:Chetos101

How old are you?:10

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:I have read and agreed to the rules

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:everything in the application has to be your own work

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No i don't have any questions about the rules

 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is making a character to play with

What is metagaming?:metagaming is to be your own character in role play

What is powergaming?:powergaming is making your character way too op

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Vincent

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 10

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):  Vincent the character has been through many adventures. His village has been attacked my Herobrine.  Herobrine summoned a zombie pig man boss that killed his dad. At that moment he had so much rage in him. so he went to try to kill herobrine.Vincent went with a diamond sword and fought everything in his way to beat herobrine. His dad taught him some tricks so he was a really good with swords. He always fought his dad and one time he defeated his dad.(But didn't kill him and that's when Vincent's dad dies). Vincent's fight was a epic fight but, Vincent won and got his revenge. everything was in peace until herobrine gain all his power back.

Personality Traits:Smart, adventurous,  and Nice

Ambitions: Vincent's ambitions are  really hard to achieve.  He wants to be really healthy to get stronger and to be a better swords man. He wants to help as much people as he can too. 

Strengths/Talents: Vincent is really good at sword skills

Weaknesses/Inabilities:Vincent is scared of lava and boss mobs. He seen many people die from lava and mob bosses

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 4 feet 10 inches  weight 63 pounds. He wears the same clothes every day he got his headband even when he was a baby.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):      

 

 

 

 

 

  

 

 

 

[tilly 5115]

 

Hello applicant. You've been denied for the following reasons:

 

• You might want to take a look at your definitions, as they're all quite vague - feel free to look them up, but remember to put it into your own words!
• Make sure that you contain more references to the lore, such as the place your character grew up in, or where he/she has traveled to or aspires to go to. Also, try including more historical things that your character could have witnessed (like the giant worm attack in Athera!) - check out the wiki if you need to.
• Your character must be eighteen years or older!
• Please improve the quality of your application because I do not feel you understand what is required in order to role-play on this server!
  
  You may reapply in twenty four hours.

 

If you need any help, feel free to PM me or ask for help in the WS chat in-game.

Good luck!

[tilly 5115]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.