Casanova9's Application redone

[magno 68]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:casanova9

-How old are you?:15

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:eastern standard

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes, I have very good grammar

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I'm a sensitive person

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:Yes, I play minecraft a lot

-How long have you played minecraft?:started before the summer

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:this will be maybe the 4th time i've roleplayed

-What do you expect this server will be like?:very interesting and wars between races

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I played on some popular servers but I left because of the griefers

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:Yes, The lore was very, very interesting

-Name the 4 races on this server.human, dwarf, elf, ork

-How did you hear about us?:I was searching for rp servers and google had a youtube link for a trailer

-Did you vote?:Yes

-What was your favourite Law?:no griefing

-What was your least favourite Law?:You must follow your kingdoms law, because what if the law is wrong

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?casanova9

In-Character:-Character Name:zerk

-What is your Race?:elf with 1 quarter human

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:casanova9

-Biography:I came from a war ravaged land destroyed by orcs in a visious battle. My grandmother was a human and the rest of my family is elf (except my uncle who is an adopted dwarf). By the age of 6 my father trained me with the bow and I became a skilled marksman. My oldest brother was a great swordsman and my sister was a farmer. My father disappeared while on guard and was never to be seen again. On the day of the battle Orcs held my father outside the walls and burned him alive. I have hated Orcs since.

-Character Age:23

-Character Appearance:loner with tathered clothing

-Character Personality:kind gentle soul

-Your ambitions:to create weapons for battle

-Can your character read or write?:only in elvish (or elfish im not sure)

-Can your character mine?:fairly, pickaxes seem heavy and I can barely hold it

-Are you a capable builder?Yes, indeed

-Can you wield a sword?:fumbles with the blade

-Enjoy Farming?:No, always tramples the crops

-Does your character have any special skills?:redstone knowledge and lumberjacking

-A screenshot of your skin:http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/wood-elf-452/

-Other Information:Will work to gain items I do not wish to find myself.

[magno 68]

If this is denied please tell me what I did wrong

[Whitebeard 126]

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having 's everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-You didn't include a skin link.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/1035-read-first-chevaliers-guide-to-posting-a-good-application/