[Denied] Application

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Character’s name: Christaphor "Chris" Brine

Character’s sex:Male

Character’s race:Elf

Character’s age:19 Human years

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):Was From Aegis But was banished from his elven village because he was overhuntimg. He likes to hunt for sport,and likes to eat pigs. He is good at Bargining,trading and such.His dad was human but was killed for stealing bread.his mom was a elf from the village. Chris is easily bored.

Personality Traits:Nice,Kind,Funny,BORED

Ambitions:Uhh.... what does Ambitions mean?

Strengths/Talents:Bows, Axes, and hunting

Weaknesses/Inabilities:is easily bored

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):height:6' 9'' wieght 96 pounds

NOTE:I cant wait 24 hours to repost so i'm going to post it right away- sorry if this upsets anyone.

 

[tilly 5115]

 

Hello, applicant. You have been denied for the following reasons:

• You have failed to wait the complete 24 hours before reapplying.

• You must use the application format that we provide for you - click here to view it.

• Your character's bio cannot be set in the Aegis map if he is only 19. Make sure that you contain more references to the lore, such as the place your character grew up in, or where he/she has traveled to or aspires to go to. Also, try including more historical things that your character could have witnessed (like the giant worm attack in Athera!) - check out the wiki if you need to.

• You have failed to attach a skin! If you need help with getting a screenshot, follow this guide.

• Please improve the quality of your application because I do not feel you understand what is required in order to role-play on this server!

You may reapply in twenty four hours - and be sure to actually wait the full time this turn.

If you need any help, feel free to PM me or ask for help in the WS chat in-game.

Good luck!

[tilly 5115]

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