[Denied] draft 2

[Remyy 952]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Krytonya007

How old are you?: im 11

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes sir/mam

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: If your evil doont be too op for rp

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no sir/mam

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I found the youtube

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: playing as a fictional character

What is metagaming?: real life things your character dosent know,

What is powergaming?: forced rp *kills marie* without the permission of other player

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Karen Stratine

Character’s sex: female

Character’s race: Adunias (dark elf)

Character’s age: 21

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):  That day it hunts my dreams, I was only 6 when the giant worm attacked. "we fled like rats running  from a cat." as my dad would say.  My name is Karen Stratine, I grew up near Ker'nor.  when I was 11 me and my 6 year old sister went to go get water, when we returned orks were in my house and they killed my father and severally hurt my mother. We helped her heal a little bit and tried to take her to Adria since we thought elves would not help her, because she was human ,We were wrong as we approached the gates she said "revenge is wrong I love you Karen, I love you Zelda" those were her last words  the doctor said she had a dieses and the orks made it worse. I took a farming job  for  food and a cottage,  they treated me like a slave. No  one would want adunias sisters. Before my parents died they taught me how to hunt cook sew, use a bow and sword . I vowed revenge on the orks who killed my parents.  I quit my job 5 years later and me and my sister started traveling .                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Wei have traveled 4 years together until last year. I found the orks who killed our father my sister wanted nothing to do with it so she left.  I traveled far and eventualy  found  them they grew  in size and easily beat me. They knocked me out and left me there to die, some monks from the cloud temple found me and helped me recover. I lost my memory I don't know who I am or were im meant to be  I have ansomnia and I pass out frequently, im lost in this world no family friends no anything, im starting out fresh.      Traits: kind ,shy, heartless at times, hardworking, loveable                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 

 Ambitions: find her sister kill the orks who took her parents

Strengths/Talents: Fighting, cooking, sewing, farmer

Weaknesses/Inabilities: cant bake, ansomnia, passes out frequently

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 5'3 110 lbs of muscle purple hair and eyes

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

Edited September 23, 2015 by Krytonya007

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

-Your meta-gaming and power-gaming definitions are far too short, and both only say a part of what each is.

-Your entire application is poorly written, and strewn with typos and errors.

-An adunian (As thats what I'm guessing you were aiming to apply as, as you put Adunis) is a subrace of humans, not elves.

-Does your character have insomnia- or amnesia? I tried looking up Ansomnia and got only mistyped posts regarding insomnia.

-Having one's parents killed by orcs and than aiming to get revenge is extremely cliche, overused, and unoriginal.

-Your characters's biography is incoherent.

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.