[Accepted] [Pending] Wildexan application 1

[WildeXan 0]

Hello! Here comes my first application.

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: WildeXan

How old are you?: 11 years old

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes I am.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes I have.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I agree to cyber bullying being strictly forbidden. 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No, there are´nt.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? From a youtube video. 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:  players assumes roles of characters. I like RPG! At the Lord of the Craft I will do roleplaying  whenever possible, during in-game interactions and in the chat stream.I also know that I should play as my dwarf characte;  For an exampel, I am a younger dwarf and can speak more common than the older ones, but I still got a dialect and will speak that way. I will always speak as my character.

What is metagaming? Not discuss anything that my character wouldnt know anything about.  When I play I will only play as my character, never as my true self. I can only write and speak as my character, and what he knows.

What is powergaming?: Powergaming is forcing actions against another player.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Bosse Bo

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Dwarf

Character’s age: 18 years old.

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

I was raised in  Goodborough in a little town well. not relly a town, it was only three house's there and in one of them I live with my mother, my uncle Edward and he's wife lived in the other and a guard in the other, My mom was the best mom in the world, when my dad died she was strong and she would always comfort me, I had to take a extra job so I started working in the mines, one day when I was going to the mine I heard a scream it was my uncle I ran to the noice and saw him he was stuck in the mine's and i heard the horrifying sound's it was an explotion I jumped down in the mine and grabbed him and I ran out with him on my back, my mother called me a hero and a fool I liked those day's. When I was 16 years old i woked up hearing people scream i ran to the window and saw my uncle's house burning and next to that moment my left wall was catching flame's I ran down to the kitchen and saw my mom talking to my uncle's wife when they saw me they said that we had to run I said"where is uncle Edward? I noticed that they where crying my mom said"he is with dad now!" "Well we have to run!" said my mom. the secondfloor started to fall apart and we ran out the house I saw it... The thing I would hate and fear for all entirety... It was a Dragon! he was bursting out fire my mom jumped infront of me she was burning but i was safe, when the dragon stoped breathing fire i runed with my mom on my back i ran to the forest and put her on the ground she said "run far away from here, run to Adria!" and she stoped breathing. The Dragon flew away and I started crying i saw Edward's wife's body on the ground, all the building was burned to the ground i started heading to Adria.

I ran away far far away from the village and ended up here at Adria.Ive been on the run for two years and I don't want to run away anymore.I want to stand up for myself and belong to something. I want to belong to the empire of Adria On my way here I was all alone and that's why Im scared of being alone. Many nights I was'nt able to sleep because of frightness of the dark and what's lurking in the shadows. Still, I am a heroic dwarf, caring about other beings, most likely other dwarfs and also humans. I'm a good person with good intenstions but still I'am able to stand up for those I care about and feel sorry for. 

Personality Traits: thoughtful, charming and Adventures.

Ambitions: I want to have a own build house and a loving and carying family .

Strengths/Talents: fast, heroic, charismatic

Weaknesses/Inabilities: I am scared to be alone like 've been for the last two years. I need to have others around me to be at my best, especially whem bad things happends. I'm easily scared because the day we got attaced by orcs I woke up hearing my mother scream "run". That's why it's hard for me to sleep when I'm alone. 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): I have dark green eyes and brown hair, I am  4 feet and 10 inches long, and my weight is 93 pounds.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

 

Best regards, WildeXan

Edited October 3, 2015 by WildeXan
I was told to make changes.

[AGP 3169]

Greetings applicant, after reviewing your application I have placed you on Pending for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You have 24 hours to make these changes. Failing to do so will result in this application being denied and thus, having to wait 24 hours before re-applying.

 

-Your definition of Roleplay is vague, please refer to the link here for guidance.

-Your definition of Metagaming is incorrect, please refer to the link here for guidance.

-Please lengthen your Biography out to make it longer. I am looking for around the size of two well sized paragraphs. You can incorporate some of the causes of your strengths or weaknesses in their with detail or branch off on more information about your character.

-Please include Server Lore into your application. Your racial Sub-Wiki can be found on the Wiki. It will help you get started in incorporating Server Lore such as certain places, wars or even significant events to state just a few examples!

-Please fill in your Weaknesses/Inabilities with more detail.

-Please provide a picture of your Character’s skin so I can review it.

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to send me a PM! As a reminder you have 24 hours to respond to me in a PM and fix your application based off the information and request above. If you do not Private Message me I will review it on my own time around 24 hours from this post. In addition to what was stated above I reserve the right to add or remove requested edits needed for the application. Good luck applicant!

Greetings applicant, after reviewing your application I have placed you on Pending for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You have 24 hours to make these changes. Failing to do so will result in this application being denied and thus, having to wait 24 hours before re-applying.

 

-Your lore is dated back to a time when your character would not be alive. Please use more current lore!

Please lengthen your Biography out to make it longer. I am looking for around the size of two well sized paragraphs. You can incorporate some of the causes of your strengths or weaknesses in their with detail or branch off on more information about your character. I will give you a few suggestions below.

-Specifically mention what village you came from.

-Orcs attacking your village is extremely cliche. Avoid using that in your backstory at all.

-Talk about your relationship with your mother, and talk about what your childhood was like. Specifically mention some events that shape you as a person, and your backstory should be then long enough.

 

 If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to send me a PM! As a reminder you have 24 hours to respond to me in a PM and fix your application based off the information and request above. If you do not Private Message me I will review it on my own time around 24 hours from this post. In addition to what was stated above I reserve the right to add or remove requested edits needed for the application. Good luck applicant!

This application is accepted. On the behalf of the Application Team we welcome you to the server as a whitelisted player. Please wait as a GM will implement you to the server shortly! While you are waiting you are more than welcomed to browse the forums and/or Wiki to refresh your mind on server events and lore.

One thing to note, though. Goodborough was an actual halfling town (that had more than 3 houses in it) and it was not destroyed by a dragon. Therefore, your biography conflicts with the existing lore of Goodborough. I ask you to therefore not roleplay as if you were from Goodborough, but an unnamed hamlet near Adria instead. Everything else checks out though, so welcome to Vailor.

 

[AGP 3169]

Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Your application will be Implemented by a GM shortly.

[Shadeleaf 1024]

Implemented!