[Denied] Application

[SoftyBunny 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: SoftyBunny

How old are you?: 12

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The no Powergaming rule

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Through searches around the internet

 

What is roleplaying?: Acting like a character you would like

What is metagaming?: Using information gained out of character, in character

What is powergaming?: Making a overpowered character

 

Character’s name: Inneth Lightfinder

Character’s sex: Female

Character’s race: Elf

Character’s age: 145

Biography:

Inneth has lived most of her life in peace with the nature,

but is not afraid to hurt it to make it better in the longer turn.

She wanders from tow to town in search of the perfect place for her among her people.

 

Inneth Doesn't like war, but she is not afraid of it either.

She has had her small fights with people now and then,

but nothing mayor. Her family is not alive anymore because

of some issues with another race. Innet h doesn't hate other race because of it,

but she does not exactly like them either.

Personality Traits: Nature Lover, Good, Sneaky

Ambitions: Finding a place to live among her friends in peace

Strengths/Talents: Bow skills, Running and jumoing.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Swords and Axes. Mines confuse her.

Appearance:

Light brown hair

Green eyes

Tan

Height: 5 feet 10 inches

Weight: 154 pounds

 

Appearance:

[mitto 2312]

under review

[mitto 2312]

 

Your Application has sadly been [DENIED]

Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet good enough to accept. Given you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt.

 

(1)

Your metagaming definition is incorrect, please correct it using the Definitions Guide found on this post:

Remember to write them out in your own words.

 

(2)

Please expand on your biography, the next points should help you with this

(2a)

Please include more important events in your characters life which have moulded them to be who they are today. Why do they have the personality traits, strengths and weaknesses you say they have? For instance if a characters weakness was they were afraid of spiders it may be because of a traumatic experience with spiders at a young age. Explain your character in detail.

(2b)
Please add server lore to your biography. Just like Game of Thrones of Skyrim, Lord of the Craft has its own lore, setting and history. In order to show you understand the universe that we're currently set in you will have to include some lore in your biography.

 

Check out our wiki!

http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Front+Page

 

(3)

Your characters appearance and general behaviour reminds me a lot of a Wood Elf, they general hang around in the woods with bows, have brown hair and green eyes. I suggest you change your race to Wood Elf, however if you do Wood Elves generally have darker skin. Like mine for instance:

If you want to do this but don't know how feel free to send me your skin in a private message and I'll alter it for you!

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

[mitto 2312]

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