[Denied] Nekrid's Re-Application

[Zarserith 2]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Nekrid (Might be BORNE10 in the future)

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Without a doubt, Powergaming.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): Not really, I'll get the hang of how things run eventually, besides that, nope.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Browsing for servers, it looked interesting. I LOVE rp, so when you say you're the #1 rp server, I'm genuinely interested.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is when you assume the role of either a pre-existing character (Superman, Master Chief, etc) or a character that you create.

What is metagaming?: Well, it's similar to breaking the fourth wall, and kinda is. It's basically having your character know things that he/she should have absolutely no way of knowing.

What is powergaming?: Pretty much making yourself way OP in rps, at least that's what I've had experience with.. on both sides, but also having an action against another character be final, giving them no chance to react. Ex: [Knight] *cuts crook's legs off and drags him away* {Crook} *dodges and throws knives into Knight's throat*

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Zarserith

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 32

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): There was a boy, his name was Zarserith, No Nightmares.

 

The boy had a father, his father's name was Derelivis, No Nightmares.

 

The boy also had a mother, her name was Ath'ralia, No Nightmares.

 

All his life the boy was taught to stand up for himself, despite the fact that they lived in a calm, secluded cabin in the forests, No Nightmares.

 

His mother was a baker, his father was a former monster hunter, now just a friendly farmer, No Nightmares.

 

The boy was often judged and bullied for how different he was, which got him into fights and trouble constantly, No Nightmares.

 

When the boy turned 18, his father taught him how to make a simple wood sword, and helped him do it, No Nightmares.

 

The boy and his family lived a quiet life, which bothered the boy, he wanted thrill, excitement, to explore and slay monsters, No Nightmares.

 

One day, he got what he wanted, except not the way he'd hoped... His father was killed by an old enemy from his monster hunting days, Nightmares.

 

This forever changed the boy, and left his mother in despair, More Nightmares.

 

Soon after the boy had moved on, his mother was killed by some horror from the Void... that was the boy's 20th birthday, More Nightmares.

 

After that the boy sold everything he possessed except for his father's old cloak, his sword, and some food and water, before setting off on a slow journey for redemption, More Nightmares.

 

The boy became a monster hunter, just like his father, and accomplished many feats he was certain his father would be proud of, Still Nightmares

 

When the boy turned 28, he lost his right eye to a very large Spider he was hunting, Still Nightmares.

 

When the boy turned 31, he was out hunting a pack of Venators which had reportedly been terrorizing a nearby village, when he saw a strange, dim, purple light appear, the orb shined bright, the boy walked up to touch it, when he did, there was a bright flash as it exploded, the boy was in searing pain as something dug into his bones and nerves, when he stood up, his vision was now a tint of purple, and much sharper, ALL of his senses were sharper now, he looked for some form of mirror or reflective surface to see what had happened, he found a small pond, and saw, horrified, what he was... right before he lost control and it all went black.

 

No More Nightmares, For He Had Become The Nightmare.

 

Personality Traits: Mysterious, Self-conflicted,  inside he's still a fighter, but that attitude is now shrouded, when he gets close to someone, he'll stop at nothing to protect them. If you manage to get close to him, he's a kind-hearted, stressed person just looking for redemption for the death of his parents.

Ambitions: To avenge his parents, slay the monsters that roam the night, get rid of his.. Darker (hint hint) side.. and become a legend.

Strengths/Talents: Absolute MASTER of the blade, has fought all his life, so he's very good in combat. He knows how to survive in the harshest landscapes, and has a heroic, "Never Back Down" mentality which is shrouded by his mysterious and quiet nature.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: His "Never Back Down" mentality often makes him get into tricky situations, bite off more than he can chew, and do reckless and risky things, he's quick to anger, quicker to violence, and is fearful of the unknown masses of the Void

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 6'8, 280 lbs, unique white hair and yellow eyes, wears custom armor and his father's old cloak 

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here)

Normal Zarserith

 

Void Beast Zarserith

 

[Pureimp10 5691]

- Your biography doesn't contain any server lore. Check out our wiki for the lore of the server.

 

- What is this Nightmare thing you keep referring to?

 

- Saying that your character is the best at fighting is ridiculously OP. Try to scale your character down, make them a bit more normal.

 

- 6'8" is incredibly tall for a human.

 

- As far as I know, you cannot transform yourself into a void beast.

 

- Your character cannot already have knowledge about magic. You must learn magic in game.

 

- Saying your village was raided and your parents killed is very cliche. Try to come up with something a bit more original. 

 

Normally, this would have been a pending app since most of your errors are in the second half of your application. However, due to the magnitude of the errors, I feel it'd be easier for you to spend the night thinking about it, and to rewrite your application tomorrow.

 

You may reapply after 24 hours.

[Pureimp10 5691]

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